Written and Illustrated.. by me

[oglzogl]

I've finally finished this damn story I've been working on. In reality, this is just one chapter of the story I have to tell but I am finished with that chapter at least.

I have sent this off to darkhorse.com 's Strip Search but am thinking I just want to have some eyes on it.. NOW!

Well, I've been looking at this story so long now I don't know anymore whether it is good or bad. Still, I hope you enjoy it.

page 1 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page1.jpg)

page 2 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page2.jpg)

page 3 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page3.jpg)

page 4 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page4.jpg)

page 5 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page5.jpg)

page 6 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page6.jpg)

page 7 (http://www.toddpowelson.com/Pages/ToddPowelson-Page7.jpg)

:D I know I'm a bit morbid but I came to grips with that a while ago :D

No Flash conversion for this yet. Darkhorse doesn't allow that on their site. Click here (http://www.darkhorse.com/community/stripsearch/index.html) if you are wanting to know what Strip Search is.

Thanks

(edit: my site appears to be going up and down. Sorry if you don't see anything. Please try again)

[Romus]

Not a bad read. Kinda like a short Twilight Zone episode, I like it.

[dARCKLOWN]

Very interesting style :)

[oglzogl]

Thanks for the comments.

"You are entering a dimension not only of sight and sound but also of mind" (Isn't that how it goes?). I always loved that stuff.

[Imp Head]

Cool story. Reminds me of the classic Heavy Metal stuff.

My only critique is that you've got a grammatical mistake on page 6. "Your free to move on..." should be, "You're free to move on..."


Brian

[oglzogl]

Thanks Imp.
Of course you are right. That should be fixed now..