Character: Paladin

[K-10]

http://kasmir.hugi.is/kasmir/umsjon/synamynd.php3?kt=060182-3109&myndnafn=WoW+Joelas+copy.jpg
Some of my first coloring in Photoshop.

I'm not sure about the color shcem, so no sugercoted c&c's, i want you to be as brutal as you can

[talmir]

ehemm.. *cracks knuckles*.. now then...

Sugarcoated:
OOh, I love his face, I love his hands and I definetly love the lensflare!!!!

Hard:
Make the armor look more like an armor, not like it's just a piece of 2d plastic hanging on his shoulder.. His sword is bent compared to the hilt, one of the arms is longer than the other one (the one behind the sword) and the lensflare is deffo too much. Draw a flare or color a glowing sword, just skip the lensflare.. imo.

Wimpy:
Like, erm, cool man... midieval powerranger man... like, awesome... huhu.

[-W.-]

No real warrior worth his sword would wear such a colour :D

no for real the colours are strange you could scale down the blond of his hair and give the armour more shadows and scratchs and imho you should really change the background ( it burns so funny in the eyes :cool: )

the face is not so bad but the ear (or the hair covering the ear ) should be more in front

[F3nix]

I bash everyone about this...

what bugs me the most.. .beside the color.... the semi-lens flare... over-dodging.... flat colors.. etc..

is that sword... it's crooked.... Look at the blade... then look at the hilt and handle.... way crooked... here's a hint... draw a straight line from the handle to the edge and work it from there...

It's a paladin... he doesnt look too holy...

[strych9ine]

Originally posted by K-10
i want you to be as brutal as you can.

*throws a puppy against the wall and kicks K-10 in the balls*
Your mother's a dirty, dirty .

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Oh, the picture...

A lot of it has been covered. If you change one thing about your art, let it be that you never use a lens flare again. If you can't use a filter properly, avoid it altogether.

[K-10]

*whimpers in a fetal position*

No lens flare, got it:googley:

[WildSpruceMoose]

Heh ya, never even think of a lens flare.

[egerie]

:rofl: "best thread ever". especially k-10s' response.