Girl wearing weird clothes in a weird BG XD

[Ale]

Some sketch I was doing today :P

http://www.z80a.hpg.ig.com.br/Random_Scene.jpg

[skvv]

lemme be the first to say DAMN... very nice, concept, execution, the whole thing... the proportions/depth are just a TINy bit off, now this isn't a bad thing (i know perspective is hard to get perfect on wacom or ps which this looks like w/ the white over greys/blacks) this actually pulls off a fisheye look, pretty dramatic.

this also looks like an open air kitchen, if it's not supposed to be, whoops, but if so, awesome, i like the concept how i see it.

[Ale]

Thank you so much!!!
Yep, it's hard! I'm trying to get used to the perspective and hope to be improving soon!! Although I'm not so young, I'm still a novice at drawing, I draw for about 2 years. So I still have a long way to get confortable with perspective, proportions, depth, etc
yeah I drew in Open canvas ^__^
And hahaha yeah it was supposed to be some kind of kitchen XD

[zeroe]

this is fantastic!
i think there are only a few minor perspective issues. and the stomach of the girl is looking a bit too wide. but the concept is great. i especially like the patterns on her clothes. youve got to color this

[talmir]

This aint no sketch, rather a full fledged drawing..

Respect.

[Prometheus|ANJ]

This could be really cool painted up, perhaps like a redlight district with different color temperatures to separate things. As it is now the background sort of collides with the girl figure.
You could try drawing a bit less lines. Too many lines describing the same thing is not really necessary.
Her arm looks a bit thin but her pose works well.

[0kelvin]

I really like this. Awesome work, man. I really love the pattern on her outfit.

I agree with what Prometheus' had to say. There are parts where she starts to fade into the background.



0kelvin

[bhuddistmonk]

That is beautiful! I love the clothes she is wearing. Only crit is to add a little more contrast. That is make the darks darker.

[Snowfly]

hey ale, your friend's been telling me you've been thinking about quitting art? why?? this is incredible!

[Ale]

Thank you SO much everyone for the tips!! ^____^

Snowwfly>> Yeah, guess I will -__- I have so many art blocks that I think my normal is to draw bad and when I draw well is just luck or something like that O_o"