just looking for some advice...

[Patch]

heya guys/gals,

I was just doodling, and I kinda like the feel of this sketch, so I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it.

Thanks in advance.

http://www.dragonbones.net/gallery/sketchbook/rollingthunder.gif

[daniela]

The perspective looks a little off to me. That may just be because the picture you posted was really small, though. Do you think you could make it a little larger so I can get a better look? Other than that it looks like a good sketch and I would love to see you finish it.

[Snowfly]

well..he's pointing his gun at something outside the picture. this leaves me with a feeling of "wha?" cos it has a narrative that doesn't really amount to anything. talking about the psychology of the piece, which is a vague thing to discuss anyway. hope i made sense.

[nikia]

It looks like the back of the bike is leaning while the front is straight. Also the handle of the gun looks to large. I think the perspective isn't bad, maybe some work on the truck would help. As for what he's shooting at.............imaginations' a good thing.

[battlemonkey]

the back wheel of the bike looks off. as if the bike is riding at a 45 degree angle. looks like he's goin fast, and on a motorbike he should prolly be holding on to the handle bar with at least one hand.
(i just realized) the other hand is shooting to the back, if he is shooting at the semi? his aim looks off.
its crazy how much you can learn from such a tiny sketch
:chug:

[Patch]

thanks gang - these are all awesome comments, and give me a lot of information to go on... will do some editing and repost when I get a couple of minutes...