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Bylo
October 9th, 2003, 01:10 PM
Next for the gallery showcase in december, a female face.
WIP
Suggestions about something?

http://www.davidsmit.com/face1.jpg
Bylo
October 13th, 2003, 01:29 PM
http://www.davidsmit.com/face2.jpg

Small update, didn't have much time the last few days (was busy getting 20 :P)

Don't really like it... it's to.. well basic... nothing really special.. so I'm not gonna take it any further .. I'm gonna start a new one.
maxetormer
October 13th, 2003, 02:07 PM
the face looks ok, i like the portrait.

small tip: place the name of your site faceing upwards insted of down, that way it is easier for the reader.

:D keep it up :D
sin
October 13th, 2003, 09:24 PM
i dunno if someone said this or not, im lazy, everything looks great except the nose looks flat. keep it up
Fipse
October 14th, 2003, 03:12 AM
Have you got a reference for this portrait? I t would be fine if you could post it, too. Without it I would say the mouth is too small. Something on the chin area is disturbing me - for me I donīt see much bone-structure in this face. Like sin said the nose looks quite flat I think you should work out this area some more. And Iīm not sure about the proportions of the head - something is not working but I havenīt got the time to work it out now.

All in all just small flaws and otherwise good rendering-technique.

Fipse