overlord(UPDATE)

[Michieru]

(UPDATE)I prenounced his shoulders and neck a little more and added a little more detail on the armor and sword

30 minute painter sketch, i like it

please crit or comment :cool:

http://www.boomspeed.com/noctisvagari/overlord.JPG

(p.s. i do consider this finished even though i said its a sketch, so dont say "doesnt this belong in the sketchs section?")

[Dakardaur]

well, even tho it looks kinda good, you cant really see many definite shapes in here other than the head and sword...everythin else is a bit too fuzzy...how about sharpenin it up a bit?

[nikia]

Hi agree. Sharpen it up a bit. Maybe define where the shoulders, neck, etc. are more. Do some highlighting on the sword. and some of the (prickles?) sticking out of him. hummm,------porcipine man? I think you might have something interesting here. Mess around with it some more. This type of sketch can be fun. Where the prickles cross each other, there's shadow. Where they stick out past each other light, depending on what direction the light is coming from. Also darker toward the bottom, lighter at the tips. Lots of possibilities. I say keep trying, nobody sucks, they only get better. good luck.

[nikia]

This definitely looks better. More defined. I like it.