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svahaaa
October 7th, 2003, 05:25 PM
part of the clockwork orange series...
i can explain if necessary, but i figured the image is alright on its own...
http://www.davidczweig.com/conart/BELL_TOWER.jpg
mos667
October 7th, 2003, 05:45 PM
I saw this in your sketchbook, just wanted to say again that it was very well done.
Just some minor things, if you want to touch it up. The red of the (person) seems a little too bright compared to the rest of the picture. Or if you want to keep this color, you may want to add some more blue in the shadows (would create a neat effect at the bottom).
Also, there seems to be that there aren't any shadows on the man, yet the light is coming from the window, and his shadow should be reflected on the stairs. The stairs also seem a bit flat to me, possibly. The shadows make it almost seem like they are flat. :(
Maybe its just me. But truly, I really love this piece. Very well done.
mos.
Bammer
October 7th, 2003, 05:46 PM
That's really awsome man. Great lighting and texture and all that, however the guy in red doesn't seem to be casting a shadow on the ground.
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