wallpaper [WIP]

[Johannes]

Hello dudes and dudettes
I would appreciate suggestions on this one, I need to crank it up a notch or two. But as Im really new to the world of color lighting and shading, I dunno exactly how? :D

(If anyone is interessted I can give links to the extremely ugly progress of this pic...)


http://home.swipnet.se/panzerkunst/wall1f5.jpg

[kenny]

looks good so far!

here's some criticism though, :p

i think 'his' right elbow is off a bit. it doesn't look foreshortened (which is what i think you were going for),
try moving his elbow in closer to his body, that might do it.

also, i think the colors are too vibrantish. try dulling them down a bit.

apart from that, it looks good. i'd like to see it when its complete.

[ZeroWave]

I would lose the background image..it's kind of swallowing up the feet..also it seems like the gun his clothes and his face all have the same specularity