CID Agents

[al-x]

http://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/sketches/ccamv2_sketch_small.jpghttp://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/sketches/ccafv1_sketch_small.jpghttp://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/sketches/ccafv2_sketch_small.jpg

would like some comments on the anatomy...

(should probably mention that this is a spinnoff of a thread in sketches & doodles)

[Johannes]

Hello fellow Swede :)

Nice style, cool poses, good use of graphite as I use to say :D
Favourite is girl3 - sarah - thats a cool pose :)


I go left to right:
Guy 1 - graham
his right arm seems a bit stiff, lower it and get more bend at the elbow
his left leg needs a bit mor "schwung", a little bit of "S" shape.
he need to lean over more to his front, hes falling backwards

girl2 - marla
basically ok
She feels a little long though, maybe because the head is on the small side

girl 3 - sarah - solid
only flaws is a weird elbow, and I think u can suggest other arm to, for added depth of figure :D

overall - the barrels of the guns are to long ;)

Looking forward to update :)

[satire]

ok, im terrible at code, here is a link to the red-lined drawing..

http://groups.msn.com/orange87/shoebox.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=92

[al-x]

thanks for the help, both of you...

Nice to see some other "Swedes" here to...