Character WIP: Kila - UPDATED

[Anchuvi]

Hi all,

Been working on thsi concept for about 12 hours now, there are areas that stil need work but I thought it was about time for some feedback...

Any comments?

http://www.ant-online.co.uk/Upload/KilaConceptC.jpg

Cheers!

[:p]:chug:

[Cadence]

Hello there, that girl of yours is looking cool!
A few things though: you need to rework her visible arm, from her elbow to her wrist, it's too thick. Also her fingers are a little too thin..
Keep posting updates!

[Molly]

Hello,


Nice chick......
A few observations.... the arm exposed is slightly out of proportion. Try and make the top half (bicep) a bit bigger to match her forearm. Also, the hand size, is a bit too big, maybe reduce the size a bit???...

Look forward to seeing this finished...

Mollyx

[Johannes]

My favourite thing is the jeanstexture - great work.

My main complaint is the belly - its to darn boy-skinny.
I agree with some of the arm crits, however I feel that a hand is allowed to be a bit over-sized (burt them fingers need some more flesh on them too).

[Anchuvi]

Cheers guys, I will work on al these comments tonight and post an update...

:D

[Yaseck]

I'd work on the skin shades now.

[Anchuvi]

Here is another update for you, she is now more or less complete...

Any final comments?

http://www.ant-online.co.uk/Upload/KilaColour_B.jpg

:D