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tharmine
October 7th, 2003, 04:10 AM
First try to paint directly in Photoshop (without sketch). http://www.shoppinglefilm.net/tc/images/girl.jpg
WildSpruceMoose
October 7th, 2003, 05:29 PM
Good painting. I'd think there is a certain sharpness missing from the character though. Now don't go crazy with line art, but perhaps some darker shades in her face, on the dress and on the boots could work well. Looking good though and with no preliminary sketches very well done.
Deadsprite
October 7th, 2003, 06:37 PM
it's that eye, the eye freaks me out! i would bring her left eye into the face more instead of letting it melt off the page.
also her chin is fubar. it needs some meat on it, cause at that much of a cutoff it looks like she doesn't have a jaw bone.
tharmine
October 9th, 2003, 06:15 PM
Thanks for the comments. :)
I will try some modifications and post later.
AnarchyAo2
October 9th, 2003, 06:27 PM
The picture is nice, but it needs more rythmn and energy.
scumworks
October 12th, 2003, 08:16 AM
The foot and the gun looks a bit strange too. I have the same tendence to end up with a "non" shaded image containing only mid tones, but thats learning. :D keep it up
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