Tempus-fight

[maxetormer]

Aint all that great image, but i guess it is good for a study,
The course of a painter is never to be happy with the work he he damn, =)
i hope i looks decent enought :D
The WIP thread:
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=11226

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/maxetormer/mx-tempus.jpg

[bwkeough]

pretty good stuff. good action and costumes. The only part that looks flat is the guy's far arm. I think that problem stems from the lighting...you've got a strong shadow below them but the highlights aren't focused on one side. It might sound goofy, but in your next image, pose up some toys with a lamp to get the lights and shadows you're looking for.

[WildSpruceMoose]

Yeah the painting looks great for a study. Dynamic poses, a good view of the fight. I think the contrast could be brought up a bit and would help sharpen the image. Like bwkeough said, some stronger lights could work nicely. Looks like a great scene.

[PsychoNova]

Is the light source coming from below the cliff? Interesting :P

[maxetormer]

The sun it is far on the righ side of the image and due that the clifft it is very hight and because there is rock blocking the sun a bit the light that hits the caracters is very low.
yeah i am about to buy a manequin of wood to make more acurated ligth plasements, thanks all for likeing the image and for all the great advise :D

utill next painting thanks a buch for takeing the time to read and post :D