Sample page

[Grendel]

http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/shotosample1.jpg

[zeroe]

i find that the actual drawings are good, pretty stylized. however the page looks smudged and dirty, and its kinda hard to follow what going on. i think you should work a bit on the clarity of the whole thing, cause it potentially looks pretty nice. keep it up

[cartoonfox]

i agree, it is hard to see quite whats going on. but it deffinatley looks good!
is it for a comic or storyboard? or something else?

[Grendel]

sample page for a project...all this will be painted over. Thanks for lookking guys ...unfortunately the way I express has a side effect of being dirty and as I get better I think ill be able to limit that,

[cartoonfox]

well its very cool!
looking forward to seeing more!

good job.

[Grendel]

http://igrendel.com/images/sequentials/sampleshoto2.jpg