new character painting

[stewart one]

Hey everyone. still working on my painting alot. heres my latest picture. trying hard to figure out anatomy and lighting lately. its difficult to say the least... anyway C&C would be much appreciated!

http://www.robotarm.se/works/joseph33.jpg

[behemot5]

hat is strange and wings are little for me...but colors are good.... just add details...it's a good pic

[stewart one]

yeah maybe ill go ahead and detail it when i get time. the wings arent meant to be functionall. theyre just there for character :)

[Franz Steiner]

I can definetely feel the light source in this picture which I like. I think the part where the wings go into the rest of the body could need some work. Maybe not as bright like the rest of his skin.

[stewart one]

added some detial and fixed the problems remarked on. although i like the wings the way they are, not useful but a fun detail :)

look better? oh and sharpened it some...

[cucaracha]

the wings don't look useable.
Maybe this is your intention; kinda like "ornaments" instead of real wings to fly.

I suggest to analyze wing anatomy - they ought to be strong, yours seem to be thin and weak.

http://webuser.rhein-main.net/su.su/adler.jpg

http://www.fires-of-vision.com/images/adler.jpg

I hope I could help you.

cu

[stewart one]

its intentional. just like you said, "ornaments".

[djfournr]

I love it. The face coud use more detail but the colors and lighting are awesome. I like the mood.