dragon tattoo (updated)

[the good war]

hey everyone a guy a my workplace wanted me to design a tattoo for him , i wouldn't get one but if he is willing to pay why not :D hey im going to give it to him on mon. or tuesday and its sunday now so any comments could save this man's leg from being permantly marked with bad art. comments for the sake of poor what's his name
http://www.angelfire.com/apes2/tgw/dragon_lorez.jpg

[the good war]

i know it looks kind of shitty but thats what you get when I try to mix 2d design aspects with 3d ideas ive fixed the shading a bit but the forms are fubar.eh.
http://www.angelfire.com/apes2/tgw/dragon_lorez2.jpg

by the way how much would you hope to charge for something like this - i have not shown him the drawing yet but we started discussing rates today and he thought my estimates were high
- i wish i would have discussed specific amounts at first when he brought up the idea!