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Grendel
October 1st, 2003, 10:40 PM
http://igrendel.com/images/pencils/sim1.jpg
WildSpruceMoose
October 1st, 2003, 10:41 PM
Cool work. Great contrast and nice comic book feel.
Yaseck
October 2nd, 2003, 06:19 AM
Fingers are too robotics. Generally this picture needs a bit of smoothness and softness.
Grendel
October 2nd, 2003, 10:20 AM
smooth and soft - im anti smooth and SOFT!!! thanks for looking.
walking-in-minefield
October 2nd, 2003, 10:23 AM
the hand definetely needs work, i think the shadings off on it, like the knuckles are too bright with no shadow, while the fingers under it are completely basked in darkness, and like yaseck said definetely smoother, and its not impossible so just try it, screw the outcome just give it a shot ok
toad
October 2nd, 2003, 08:13 PM
look man, i'm all about doing things my own way, but softening parts of this piece up wouldn't hurt. also i think that you need to decide where and how intense your light sorce is. Finally the mouth is too far left....infact i think the whole lower half of his face it being drawn to the left.
other than that, i like the concept and idea of the picture, keep it up!

i gotta quit posting C&C.
Grendel
October 2nd, 2003, 09:11 PM
Im not disagreing with any of your suggestionms thanks for the comments...I agree I will redraw another cover and post it.
This one has too many flaws
Luke Mrozek
October 3rd, 2003, 08:50 AM
Are u the one who's the author of book-cover for upcominning Simeon:Bloodbath graphic novel by ChromiumComics?

I would work some on his mouth, a bit on a hand and maybe would soften a bit this mess around him.

Luke.:evilbat:
Grendel
October 3rd, 2003, 10:57 AM
,no I just draw the web series - I dont understand..about the biting..heh