Dumptruck

[svahaaa]

lil' dumptruck design, to explore the slightly futuristic side of con-design - stuff designed for the near future...within the next century or so.

crits more than welcome...

http://www.davidczweig.com/conart/DUMPTRUCK_03.jpg

[al-x]

Nice concept

But you should work on your lineweight and elipses.

Considering lineweight: Try making all the lines that would cast a shadow a bit heavier

and here's a good tut on eplises
http://www.drawthrough.com/tutorials/index.html

[svahaaa]

cursed ellipses...

yeh...read dat tutorial over and over again, and no matter what i do, they still come off a bit wonky.

but it's funny you should mention it, al-x...with this one, i actually built a rough model in maya (just for very basic shapes) and then drew on top, to get the perspective right, especially on the tires...but i still get the ellipse issue.

and good call on the lineweight...it's funny, though...i know that style can work from time to time, but i'm not entirely convinced that it's always effective. but i'll give it a whirl on this one.

thanks!

[Yaseck]

I'd work a little bit more with the elipses.