Crazy f%^king series

[wutangkiller]

hi. i'm john lee. nice to meet you.
it is my recently works.

http://cfs6.tistory.com/image/14/tistory/2008/03/17/02/38/47dd5b2cec42c

http://cfs6.tistory.com/image/2/tistory/2008/03/17/02/38/47dd5b2a70675

http://cfs6.tistory.com/image/11/tistory/2008/03/17/02/38/47dd5b20db95b

http://cfs6.tistory.com/image/4/tistory/2008/03/17/02/38/47dd5b1d1aa7e

http://cfs6.tistory.com/image/10/tistory/2008/03/17/02/38/47dd5b25efaf5

[Quigleyer]

so... you have an obsession with falling eh? hah hah.

I guess with that said, i really should ask... if the first image of them falling? I can't really judge this work under the context i'm given... which is non existent. I like your modeling, but some of the lower opacity strokes on the guys back in the first one just scream "I DID THIS IN PHOTOSHOP" and that's not fun.

Nice figure drawing, always good to do. Contrast seems to be working, she looks like a person... but then one hand is a LOT bigger than the other one.

Third one... bitchin'. I like the modeling, like the color... almost seems made out of clay.

The moped piece. I kind of feel this one suffers from the same thing I said about the first piece, and the textures of the brick really don't seem to come through in the graffiti. The sign also appears pasted, though not too badly (i'm guessing you fiddled with that for a while and it probably looks a lot better than it originally did). She needs a smaller bikini top :). Or not...

Last one. Watch the streaky, low opacity photoshop thing. Man, it looks like a good portion of her is about to be cut in half. Her arms, at least, appear to be above the propellers... which tend to spin at great speeds and the original dawn of the dead tells me can cut through bone. I believe old horror movies, so... I'm gonna need to see a follow up piece. Of like two seconds later.... it's gonna be great!

this is gonna sound REALLY WEIRD, but you're really good at rendering PANTS. I was like "nice pants" to myself when i saw all of them, except the pantless wonder in the second drawing, but I'm sure you could draw her pants well, too :).

I don't really have a lot more to say other than the little nit picks I gave. I'd work a lot on trying to work out your digital mark, it's really evident in some pieces, and that often detracts from work much more than you'd think. Your compositions seem to be working for the most part, I'm not too wild about the moped piece- the clouds seem to be AROUND them and take up parts of the composition more than I'd like to see. In that piece there isn't a lot of linking between them and the brick wall, one girl is looking away and the other has her eyes closed. This leaves a moped, barreling through the air towards a brick wall, no emotion, and no attention to the wall at all. I think a glance at the wall would cause the viewer to follow her eyes and BOOM... there'd be a brick wall. OH SHIT! But i'm looking behind the moped where the chick riding bitch seat is looking... right off the canvas. I hope that made sense.

There's also very little interesting about the first piece. You did create a triangular eye trap with their bodies, but its dead center in the image and REALLY small... making me look at about 20% of the image before my eyes easily move on.

keep chuggin'. Post more.

[Sylvain-Klein]

good ambiance
very good paint, intersting style ... :)