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Aidan
September 29th, 2003, 08:51 AM
First art post on conceptart.org. Kinda embarassing. Well...

...Already few months ago.
Don't have much time to draw since school has started.
Just got my new scanner workin...

http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan1.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan2.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan3.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan4.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan5.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan6.JPG
http://aidan.dreamelement.de/zeichenkram/scan7.JPG

Nothing spectacular, would love to hear some crits.


PS: Hope it ain't too large sized.

/e: My sketchbook is over a4-size, so there's a bit missing.
f00l
September 29th, 2003, 09:15 AM
nice stuff.
nice indeed.
EVIL
October 3rd, 2003, 10:55 AM
looks great, altrough they miss something parkling, some personality. The reason for this is the eyes, you dont really spend much attention to them even when the eyes are the most importand part IMO. some good eyes can really bring life in your drawings. good luck my friend!
Main Loop
October 3rd, 2003, 12:08 PM
i like the attentioon to the anatomy of the face, and the linear quality, but some of the hands look like they're facing the wrong way......
WildSpruceMoose
October 3rd, 2003, 03:23 PM
Some cool stuff. Seems very single topic oriented, but the degree at which the work has been done is very good. Nice shading, contrast, anatomy, renderings, just amazing work. Just keep up the flow of sketches as best possible ;)
TheDirtSyndicate
October 6th, 2003, 07:57 PM
actually, i think your anatomy is off a little. and it happens too often to be on purpose. like the first page, every head is misshapen. its as if all their heads are made out of clay that has sat in the sun for awhile and things are starting to 'move'.
same with some of the anatomy of the bodies, the arms are sometimes too long, necks sometimes too long, or not there, not very consistent.

overall, i think their good. good work. nice shading. but i think you'd be great if you worked a little more on anatomy.
but there's nothing wrong with streatching and fucking with anatomy....making things look elongated on purpose is ok. but like i said, i could tell that some of the things in there wern't on purpose. please dont take it the wrong way.