spawn redone

[Amerkokh]

http://www.jahannam.org/amer/spawned1test.jpg
well after all critiques i`ve taken from great ppl here you go i re did him,and i really wanna take more crits...very helpfull indeed
peace

[catterpillar]

more contrast

and give him legs

:evilbat:

[Deadsprite]

why give him legs, he is framed and bursting out of it, i think it adds a nice touch to the image
what i would suggest though is to crop it over to the right a little more so he isn't right dab in the middle.

[jilted_one]

pretty cool mate, i like the work (even though i hate the new comics). I second the crop also it will keep the focus in the art.

[toad]

:eek: holly-crap man! this is an awsome piece!!!!!! verry cood contrast, dont put leggs in, its friggin hep having him comming out of the square. my only crit, (and its not even big) is the right arm, it seems too scrawny at the elbow. y'know make it more life-like. but like i said, its not a big deal.:chug: cheers man!