Need Help with WIP

[tbone28]

Need your help.

Please give me some critz on this. I know that blurriesness is an issue and I am trying to correct that. Suggestions?

http://webpages.charter.net/requisite.variety/images/art/ReqVar/deamondisk.jpg

Thanks

[behemot5]

more work...more work... increase volumes...

[Cadence]

Nice concept.
The bluriness can be resolved by adding shadows/highlights using hard edged brushes. Also, add more colors to his skin. Try using greenish hues for shadows..

[WildSpruceMoose]

Yeah blurriness will be easily fixed by some harsher more edged brushes and darker colours? It is coming along nicely though. Keep at it!

[Phuzion]

my suggestion would be to try some muted tones... I think you're working all on the right side of the pallette (photoshop-wise). Try moving over the left side a bit, and only use those saturated tones for emphasis, and don't feather the brush so much... if it's done with the airbrush, use the normal brush feathered down a step or two. But the concept is nice. Keep it up!

[Danilo]

Work more precise, and think about form: Dont wory about colour right now. Just do light and dark.

[Forge]

maybe your colors are too colored :bash: :bash: try to take more sweet colors less agressive i don't think this purple background is a great idea... keep on workin'