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al-x
September 28th, 2003, 02:37 PM
Another school asignment,

draw 10 humans doing specific things. (one digging, one reading a map etc etc). The piece was supposed to focus on the people and not the background, though I wonder if I could have added more details to the background?

I thought it would be fun to put them in a post apocalyptic world . :)
http://www.alextornberg.com/art/concepts/scens/leaving_low.jpg
We also had to add a 18century steammachine to the piece.


If anybody wants to color it they are very welcommed here's a
high res version (http://www.alextornberg.com/art/concepts/scens/leaving_high.jpg)

gasmask
September 28th, 2003, 02:45 PM
dam real nice line quality, but i think ur perspective has some issues, mainly the guy by the tree, it doesnt look right

gallon
September 28th, 2003, 07:45 PM
Sounds like a classic Sven Holmberg assignment, Say hi from me ;)

al-x
September 29th, 2003, 12:35 AM
gasmask: Yeah, you're right. I see it now. The running guy looks a bit strange to.

gallon: will do :)

Theo
September 29th, 2003, 10:42 AM
Wouldnt it make sense if the perspective lines aimed towards the horizon? Im no good at persp. Just a thought.

I like the entire scene though. Id really like to see it colored:)

keep fightin.

-T

bwkeough
September 29th, 2003, 12:09 PM
That steam cannon rocks! good variety to the costumes, too

next time you do a whole bunch of people on one image, try to join the clusters of figures. There are nice moments (steam cannon, map reading, dog chasing), but they're isolated.

:thumbsup:

al-x
September 29th, 2003, 06:07 PM
bwkeough: You're abolutely right.

Theo: The only perspective lines you see are the minor axis of the elipses (liked having them there so I kept them while erasing the other) and all of them leads towards the horizon (the wheels connects in a point pretty far outside) except the minor axis for the pipe, which leads towards a point a bit below the burning city.

I don't really like this piece, so I won't spend hours coloring it. Thats why I posted the hight res version, if somebody else felt like doing it...

Atmospheria
September 29th, 2003, 06:24 PM
well...nice drawing but there is a little problem...the three man on the background are so small...make them a little bigger..then it'll be cool...

jilted_one
September 29th, 2003, 09:18 PM
very cool man, i like the work.