warrior/ graffiti clothing brand concept

[scottieb]

hey, This is a poster I did for a side subject in my Industrial Design course. Its a clothing company with comic/graffiti themes. The graffiti is supposed to come out of his sword. It isn't actually worth any marks but i had fun doing it! Maybe one day when i have money i'll start the company:)
c&c welcome.http://www.members.optusnet.com.au/brackenreg/SW.jpg

[MrMojo]

Very nice. Love it.

[winjer]

you should change that bottom guys helmet to headphones so it looks like the guy with the sword owned him at freestyle rap. also the sword guy could be dissing his weak flow. i think that would really add some funk. or you could not listen to me

[walking-in-minefield]

i like it, kindo of a hellspawn meets nwa theme to it, the guy could be detailed a little more, and the sword looks a little pasted, but other than that love the concept

[WildSpruceMoose]

Cool pic. The shadows on the face give a nice "mystery" to it.

[brads3d]

pretty good, i like the colors and shadows. you might move the 'ah-ah-ah' pointy-finger and arm further from the body, as it gives the swordsman a sort of hog-tied look, and therefor reduces his dominating appearance.
also, i may be imagining things, but is there a racial message going on?

[scottieb]

hey guys, thanks heaps for your comments. Soz I took long to write back . Went on a hike! I like the freestyle battle idea winjer. Maybe i'll change it some time. The finger is supposed to be near his mouth because he's silencing him. It's probably vague the way i've drawn it but the clothing brand's name would have given it away if i put it there. And i didn't really mean there to be any racial message but now i look at it...lol.