Wishful thinking

[iamgale]

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This is my first post here in this forum. hehe I'm not expecting much comments, I'm just trying this out since I'm new in CA. :heart:

There are a lot of great artists here. :bow:

So this artwork here is something I made out of my very busy schedule. A lot of things are off but i don't intend to change/edit this anytime soon. Enjoy!

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Okay I'll give some explanations to this drawing, this is a drawing that represents me at my most stressful situations. I am very thin when I'm stressed (that's why she looks malnourished or something) and I just wanna rest for a while. So this drawing is my 'Wishful Thinking.' Taking a nap somewhere surrounded by plants without noise. That's what the text is all about.


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[geronimo]

she looks rather malnourished...emacitiated, is the word I am looking for

[mecos]

it's very pretty. my only comment would be that the cropping of the plants doesn't look deliberate. i would either continue the plants off the page or give them more empty space around them to make it oasis like.

[alicat08]

I love everything about this one. The message, the use of colors, and the fact that she is so peaceful looking in a busy environment...nice job

[petitemistress]

the very saturated pink in the upper part of the artwork is bothering me...
thats all i'll crit simply bcz thats easy to change, in case you wanna change anything...