The Ghost

[rlamunyon]

hey everyone, just finished this yesterday. medium is ink with watercolor. i would love to hear any critiques regarding color and/or environment (inside/outside illusion)....thanks for looking!

[evolutionofshaun]

I really enjoy the light in this piece! I think you've done a good job with those yellow highlights! Maybe a bit more attention could have been paid to the figure in the background, he looks a bit akward.

[sourgasm]

You should definitely coat the outside area visible through the door with a wash of yellow. It would make a perfect contrast to the cool blue interior and it would make the yellow highlights on the figures make sense.

[rlamunyon]

i already had one wash of yellow on the (outside)..its more yellow on the original-scanning is kind of a compromise and im still getting the hang..thanks for commenting i would really like more imput!