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Franz Steiner
September 24th, 2003, 11:25 PM
...found her on my way home. One of her wings was broken...
...well....

http://www.franzsteiner.de/pix/cgtalk/fallen_angel.jpg

ODIN SIX
September 24th, 2003, 11:38 PM
NIce ,, I like the color scheme..

I think her right arm looks a bit too skinny...

I like the wings and how they come off the sholder

Franz Steiner
September 25th, 2003, 12:46 AM
I had to mirror it to see what you mean. Thanx

walking-in-minefield
September 25th, 2003, 01:33 PM
wow, i had to scroll down before looking at the face, and i was thinking this looks like it'll be cool, but then I saw the face and it freaked me out, I swear to god it looks just like this girl I used to know, sorry I can't make any crits on it, it looks too much like her, can't stare at it for too long, very real though, very real. post more

zeroe
September 25th, 2003, 01:42 PM
very nice
good toning, nice composition
good contrast of light and dark. however seomthing about the wings seems a bit lopsided, cant put my finger on it though mmm

Franz Steiner
September 25th, 2003, 02:08 PM
well zeroe I heard that with the wings before but I cant quite
figure what exactly it is.

Buffalo
September 25th, 2003, 03:34 PM
I think this is a cool picture. The face is very nicely rendered as is most everything else. I think the problem with the wings is it looks like you have them connecting to her collar bone instead of a more stable place like the shoulder blades.

Pushing the wings back and seperating the shoulders might make her wings look more stable and pull her face and body forward. Good luck.

BurnComics
September 25th, 2003, 04:31 PM
Rebecca Romain Stamos?

Loga4
September 25th, 2003, 07:38 PM
Hmm...Pamela Anderson,is it?

Franz Steiner
September 26th, 2003, 02:24 PM
thanx Buffalo I will try to fix those wings wings...

Burn and Loga, both wrong.;)