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otis
September 23rd, 2003, 11:09 PM
Did this piece for me mum. It's her cat Pud who hates taking baths, but never put up a fight. Share your thoughts, crits...

Thanxhttp://members.cox.net/studio-od/pudy2.jpg

NOOSE
September 23rd, 2003, 11:24 PM
lol yah!... looks great! you may or may not want to concider maybe a few drops of water dripping off the front of the cats nose and face but it looks fine as is!

I wish I knew what it is that makes wet cats so damn funny :)

mos667
September 23rd, 2003, 11:26 PM
I love it! The eyes are aweeesome :D. Something seems weird about the face, almost as if its a dog-cat! It's so great, and cute. She'll love it! :D I do!

:bow:
mos.

mtw
September 23rd, 2003, 11:27 PM
I think you got the expression right. The face looks a little bit like that of a small dogs, but maybe that's just the wet fur. Also, it would be nice to see the water running on the cat, instead of hidden behind him.

otis
September 24th, 2003, 01:03 AM
Thanx for the comments. Yeah, the water was running down her back, but I think it would look better with some rolling down the face...just got to figure out how I'd illustrate that properly.

creedguytrent
September 24th, 2003, 04:31 AM
oooooh awsome color scheme. Nice composition... the water is perfect against that orange wall. I got a thing for purple shadows too i guess. I love it.

-trent

Bralt Hannicart
September 24th, 2003, 08:20 AM
looking great man, but perhaps make the water a bit translucent. so u can see the underwater part of the cat. there seems to be a perspective problem with the watersurface as well, check the line going behind the cat. the lines are moving away from eachother (the sink and the water surface line)

other than, one fine digital painting !