lots of digital painting... ( UPDATE V3.0 )

[softdrawer]

honk !

[bustabustu]

I really love 2-3. Your style and imagination is outstanding. I would love to see more work like those any day.

[softdrawer]

i mostly get my imagination from music and when i take a walk outside... kinda basic but its mAgic ! ;)

[softdrawer]

honk !

[softdrawer]

but all the lighting would have to be redone... aaahh screw that, i hate oldies.

Doohh !

bandwidth consumption exceeded !!! sorry evryone but i guess it will take a short time before it comes back...

ive chaged of host and now we should be able to share the view...

but the resolution sucks !!!

[softdrawer]

hmmm... not many crits and comments... i guess people rather look at the images and just switch to another on lazy mode.

thats ok though

[softdrawer]

honk !

[Franz Steiner]

your work sucks.......................just kdding

no really some of the strongest images ive seen around,
and you do them with a mouse? respect.

[softdrawer]

well you know what, i havnt tried the wacom tablet yet but i doubt it makes a big diffrence and i mean it. Like i know the pressure thing but i can still get around that with my skillz ;)

but thanks for the : your work sucks

that made my day ! :D

[bwkeough]

the guy with a plane strapped to his back and the most recent image are very nice. Great conceptual stuff. I'm glad you popped this back to the top, last time I looked I couldn't see your images. Don't stop drawing and keep your eyes open, high school isn't fun but it's not entirely worthless.

[Marvin5]

I think that it lookeds better when u flipped the guy with the plane, its a very cool piece. It looks like hes gonna fall backwards, but can the plane help him? or is the plane just to heavy....

Er...anyway... Good Job, im very impressed! I love your style!

/Marvin5

[softdrawer]

Thanks guys, i really preciate it...

i might change the angle on the plane guy and replace my signature heh... so it doesnt look all messed up.

alx

[softdrawer]

honk again !

[softdrawer]

... hah... honk !

[jkior]

I just want to say I LOVE your work. The first is probably my favorite.

Since you're really asking for crits, I tried to go through and find anything that seemed wrong to me. I may have been kind of blunt in the crits, I didn't put a lot of effort into cuishoning them - please don't take it harshly. Also, I may have thought of something as wrong that you intended to be that way. If so, ignore it! I can only point what I see as wrong, I can't help you fix it, cause I don't know anything about art myself.

1 the lighting on the figure is very soft and ambient, compared to the steps. I kinda like to effect, but it may be a little too soft.

2 his left (our right) ankle is strangely bent. I don't think mine can bend like that, unless it's already broken. Of course if the guy's stuck on the pillars, it might be!

3 guy in the wheelchair is still a little sketchy compared to the bird and the clouds. Not a finished work, though, so whatever.

4 i just love this one. Almost Escherish or something. The painting on the guy doesn't look quite right (I think it's because of the roughness, but I'm not sure). The roughness of the tree and the figure don't really match the smooth perfection of the walls. Obviously, they won't have the same texture, but the style seems different somehow. The perspective on the stairs doesn't change up the stairs - they're flat all the way down to the floor, but I think that might be your intention.

5 can't think of anything

6 i like the concept. No crits, cause it's a speed painting.

7 I just noticed that the rope holding the plane to the guy's back is bent in a weird way. I think it should be stretched - would give a better feel of carrying the plane's weight

8 again, the paintwork on their clothing is a little strange - kinda scratchy, if you know what I mean - doesn't really fit with their faces, message, and background. The anatomy of the (our) right guy's (our) right hand is a little off.

9 nothing to say, really. His feet are weird, especially on our right. Same problem with the clothing.

10 clothing again. I think the shading on the carpet directly in front of him is a little weird. His head has the painting problem.

That about sums it up! The problem that I mentioned with the painting roughness is the only overall problem I see. Unfortunatly, I can't help you fix it, because I have exactly the same problem - anything whatsoever complex comes out muddy and scratchy. Maybe it comes from just not developing it enough. I'd be very interested if anyone else has any tips/excercises to help with this!

How old are you, by the way? I'm looking forward to more of your work.

P.S. If you want more crits, try posting at some other forums, like EatPoo. Just a thought.

~jkior

[softdrawer]

see u lata !