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Antti
February 9th, 2008, 10:42 AM
A bunch of paintings that I did during past two or so months. Mostly in oils and acrylics. The last three are all acrylics. All critique would be appreciated.
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Jason Rainville
February 9th, 2008, 12:00 PM
Beautiful stuff :D
A quick (but somewhat subjective) composition crit on the first one: IMO I think the 'voice graphic' has to break out of the sillouette of the jacket on it's appraoch to the mouth, since it took me a little while to figure out it wasn't part of the garment.
JesArt
February 9th, 2008, 01:43 PM
I love your style man, give me more
Haxxxor
February 9th, 2008, 06:56 PM
wow!
I love them...
great values and mood.
I like the dude on the bicycle.
natethegrate
February 10th, 2008, 04:53 AM
really like the one with the sombreroed skullmen... cool strokes and colors
agreeable
February 10th, 2008, 09:21 AM
loving 'paatonWeb' - partly due to subject but just a great image too.
Wisteria
February 10th, 2008, 09:30 AM
Looks great! I love the figure coming out of the matrioshka doll, very creative. I agree with Jason Rainville's comment about the first piece, I didn't realize the swirls weren't part of the figure's jacket.
entdroid
February 10th, 2008, 09:30 AM
Excellent work, I love the last three the most :)
Great textures and colors!
light
February 10th, 2008, 11:02 AM
That last one is incredible, though you should probably try breaking out of that 1 figure composition thing you got going on in all of these.
rinaswan
February 10th, 2008, 02:08 PM
Love the matrioshka doll, the astronaut, Dali's funny moustache, and the cyclist most. They're so exceptional and full of satirical sense. Btw, I think adding one or two figures/objects will change the picture's atmosphere more or less.
Baron Impossible
February 10th, 2008, 02:13 PM
I like them all. The astronaut piece I think's wonderful although the last one strikes me as technically the best. A strong Phil Hale influence?
Antti
February 10th, 2008, 02:34 PM
Jason Rainville & Wisteria, You are right about the swirls blending in with the jacket. Thanks for pointing it out.
Baron, I have always liked mr Hales works but I was kinda aiming for style similiar to nicolas' with the last one. I guess I failed :)
light and rinaswan, yep, I should get more objects in my paintings. And backgrounds wouldn't hurt either. I am working on that though. Thanks.
Thanks for all feedback dudes & dudettes.
Antti
March 2nd, 2008, 02:48 PM
I just got these three back home so I thought I'd post them too. All oil.
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