Character: Cyborg gal w/ severe eye trauma

[navel_lint]

http://blackeden.org/images/ranger2web.jpg

this is based off of an older sketch i did a couple years ago...
of my ex. lol. her face is everywhere. almost evrey picture i've done
over the past 3 years has her in it.

anyway. i always liked this image but never had time to redo it...until now.

charcoal. painter. photoshop.

hope you like it.

[darkcult]

Mixing and experimenting, mothers of all inventions…
I like the textures a lot.

[Maybe if the image was posted in a smaller format (size) it would be more compact (tight),
this way is more “in your face”.]

Keep up the good work.

[the good war]

i love the contrast but the eye seems larger than what it should be and the lips are a bit too wide and you kind of lost the contrast around the lower part of the eye
and i think the image might have more impact if the eye were red pursay to contrast with the rest of the image and the image seems to be imbalanced in terms of composition considering the blue/green distortion on the right side of the image i propose either counter acting that with some other machine version of the distortion on the left side or by incorperating the blue/green distortion over to te left side or
by cropping some of the machine head


or perhaps all my comments will homogenize your work w/ everyone else ?
it looks pretty good outside the couple of things i mentioned and by the way i think you and i have similar tastes you can check out my old thread " home " or something like that

[Groover McNab]

looks good. wonder why so few replies? anyway, nice textures.

[Lunch_Box]

Looks awsome. really nice work.
I love the colors and textures espeacaly in the face

[lauri]

it has this really creepy feeling
like it. i like it a lot.
how did it look like before you took it to psd?