character concept

[mtmckinley]

I'm not primarily a 2D artist... mostly 3D game models, so I need to work on it! Here's a character design that I really like, and want to explore.

Here's the first sketch I did for it a while back: http://www.mtmckinley.net/sweet_tart1.jpg

here's progress so far on new pic:

http://www.mtmckinley.net/sweet2a.jpg

Her feet are very WIP. I also don't like her right leg... seems too thick or something.

Pointers are much appreciated!

[mos667]

I, personally, think it seems WAY too crowded. I mean, theres the teddy bear, the gun, the hulla hoop, the rollarskates, the skirt, the hair! Simplify it, take out the hulla hopy and the teddy bear, maybe even the gun. Doing that would make it much more friendly, not so overwhelming.

Otherwise it looks pretty good. I can't complain about the anatomy of it much, since I don't truly know it myself, but her arms seem small and legs seem big. Besides that and the crowdedness of it, I love it!

I look forward to seeing more progress on this.

Hope I helped.

mos.

[mtmckinley]

Thanks for the comments. :)

Well, the idea is that this would be a game character, and the gun and teddy bomb would be parts of her arsenal.

I appreciate it!

[mtmckinley]

still trying to get the anatomy right... her leg is still bothering me. :p

http://www.mtmckinley.net/sweet2b.jpg