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OLSEN
September 19th, 2003, 08:16 PM
Hi all,
heres my latest piece, it could use some more work here and there, but i feel that for every brush stroke i add it looses that special feeling it had when it was just a young sketch, so its finished, atleast for me.
http://medlem.spray.se/ksmolsen/image/MECH.JPG
Crits and comments still wanted and needed. Cheers. :)
Edit: Did a last minute fix on the trafic sign.
Killer Napkins
September 19th, 2003, 09:05 PM
thats totally awesome man.. thats badass to the max.. but the only yhing i noticed that could be easily fixed is on the street sign.. like on the metal pole part it looks liike the top outline of it is too solid kinda makin it look cartoony with all ur other stuff looking smudgish.... i dunno.. im an idiot.. but great work .. i love it!
OLSEN
September 19th, 2003, 09:16 PM
Killer Napkins-> Youre right about the pole, its a mistake from my side that i was too blind to notice, i suck at making poles. Its an easy fix so iŽll fix it as soon as i finished todays DSG.
Im glad you liked it. :)
grinn
September 19th, 2003, 09:21 PM
what happened to the guys moving through the trench? I liked that though it could have used some work.
OLSEN
September 19th, 2003, 09:29 PM
Grinn-> i decided to dump the guys in the trench, i felt they took too much atention away from the real fight. So i replaced them with a rusty trafic sign...
theres a version with the guys in the trench here:
http://medlem.spray.se/ksmolsen/image/WIP%20MECH3.JPG
yfront
September 20th, 2003, 12:29 AM
Great work! A 16:9 sized canvas would be nice with more mechs at the horizon. And exactly where in Stockholm did this happen? :rambo:
OLSEN
September 20th, 2003, 12:54 AM
Yfront-> It happened in Alby. Where else? :D
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