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yoitisi
January 29th, 2008, 05:10 PM
Post here your results for assignment 5: Ellipses and Cilinders. This thread is for my mentees only, if you want to post your work but are not my mentee please go to the space for Lurkers.

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Assignment 5: Ellipses

Now that we have covered straight lines and cubes, it is time to start on some ellipses. As you probably know, circles in perspective turn into ellipses. Below you can see this in some everyday life situations:

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However, before we venture into all the fiddly bits of construction such objects, lets start by the actual drawing of ellipses.

The funny thing with ellipses is that you will find that drawing them is quite a natural movement for the arm. The important thing here, even more so than with straight lines, is to involve your whole arm into drawing the ellips, otherwise you end up with a flat pancake or even worse. Again, this has to do with the fact that the range of a wrist movement or an elbow movement simply doesn't allow for anything big.

Another important aspect of drawing ellipses is to draw several of them to form one complete ellips. If you only do one 'round', you end up with the top drawing in the figure below. This ellips has an open space on top because quite often when doing only one pass the two ends don't connect properly to form the total ellips. This might seem not too much of a problem, but once we start doing constructions with ellipses you'll see you miss a lot of information because of the open end.

The top ellips also doesn't allow for any correction while drawing it, as it is pretty much a single shot to get it right. Imagine you not only need to draw an ellips, but also have to put it in a defined space through predefined points. The best way to draw the freehand ellipses is by drawing it in the air for a couple of times first before you put your pen to the paper and when you do put your pen to the paper continue the same ellips about two or three times in one fluent movement (round and round and round :)). If you find the first round is a bit flat or has other problems, try to correct it on the go in the second round and so on until you feel the ellips is there. You see, the ability to draw thin lines is again very useful. Also, don't overdo it by going over it ten times, this will only make the lines thick and wonky. After three or four times you usually have the ellips right, if not you need to practise more (even true for me, my examples are a bit rusty here and there I'm afraid :P).

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You'll notice that no matter how wrong your first attempts were, the eye almost naturally picks the ellips out of the knot of lines. Overdoing the ellips counters this a bit as I said before. Also, going over it one more time to make a thick line from the right ellips often makes it look unnatural and wonky, as the quick movements of the inital cluster of ellipses create a much smoother image. I have gone over a couple of my ellipses in this assigment to make them stand out a little more, but you might notice they seem a bit wobbly already because of it. Leave it out for now I advise.

So, the first thing I want you to do is by taking a fresh sheet A3 size and start drawing as many ellipses as you can fit on it. Differ the angle of the ellipses, so not only horizontal ones as my examples above but do all kinds of angles. Try not to turn the paper though. Also, don't make them all as flat as above but experiment with more rounder ones up to full circles as well. Overlap and drawing through other ellipses is not a problem, the point is to do as many as you can to get a feeling for the movement. No need to post it either, as the rest of the assignment will prove how well you took it in.

Okay, now that you have some sort of feeling for drawing ellipses, it is time to throw in some science :) Nothing fancy, but it will be a huge help for drawing ellipses. An ellips is in fact a mathematical describable figure: a collection of points on a flat surface of which the distance to two points A and B (the total length of the lines AC + AB) is always the same. Might sound a bit official and all, but you might have heard of or seen the example of the two nails and a piece of string tied loosely between them. With this instrument it is possible to create a perfect ellips (see the figure below).

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There is one important thing, 'ovals' and 'ellipses' aren't the same thing. Ovals are made up of parts of circles, while ellipses don't actually have anything of a circle in them. Also, ovals aren't always symetrically, an important aspect of ellipses as you'll see in the next paragraphs.

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As you can see in the figure above, ellipses are symetrical in two directions: the upper and lower half and the left and right part are symetrical. This follows from the mathemathical description of an ellips and can probably be proven scientifially, but for now I think you can just believe this.

The important aspect you have to get from this is the vertical and horizontal line. These will be a huge help for drawing the ellips later on. Please note that these two lines are always, no matter what, perpendicular to each other. Even if the cilinder is rotated, drawn on its sides, whatever. Other points that may be of help later on are the points where the ellips intersects the diagonal lines as seen in the figure below:

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The upper image here is a circle (or as much a circle as I could manage at the moment :P). Notice the intersection where circle meets the diagonals AC and BD, this is roughly a small third of the line A1 in the drawing, measured from the corner. About 3/4 is also fine, in the end it's mainly about checking whether your ellips is more or less right.

The drawing above is actually the second part of the assignment: draw two long vertical lines, roughly the length of your sheet of paper, and in between first create a square (make it a perfect square, measure the distance between your two verticals with your nail on the length of your pen) and draw a circle in there. Doing this in one go is sometimes hard, especially since we're drawing big here, so it might be handy to draw it in quarters. Make sure the end result is a circle though, and I advise you to only do this with full circles as ellipses are far easier the other way.

Then, underneath this, draw rectangles of declining height (check the example) and start drawing in the ellipses and its corresponding points. Try to draw the ellipses the way I told it in the first part of this assignment.

The above is actually still the basics of ellipses but doesn't really tell you how to use them in cilinders and all. The next step by step description will explain something about that. We will start out with a simple cilinder that stands on it's bottom (or top) surface, as these are easier to start with.

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Step 1: Start out by drawing the two dividing axis as described earlier. Make it handsized, so the vertical line is about 15cm. The vertical axis has two functions here, the first being it divides the ellips in two equal halves, the second is that it is the central axis around which your whole cilinder will revolve around. There's a little snag here which I'll explain later on. On the two axis, set out the points already through which the line of the ellipse will go (again using the information I described above).

Step 2: Draw the ellipse. As you can see, my first two attempts only managed to touch a couple of point while missing others completely. The third is still off mark here and there. This is not a problem, somewhere in there is the right ellips. Don't stop during the drawing of the ellipse but continue to make the full turn two or three times.

Step 3: Now add the axis for the ellipse on top. Also, add the outlines of the cilinder already. This makes it easier to aim the ellipse than by having to aim for only two points. I also already added the points on the vertical axis. I chose the distance between those points slightly smaller than the bottom ellips, as flat surfaces closer to the horizon appear more flat (when on the horizon they appear as a line only). Don't overdo it though, this cilinder isn't huge so the horizon is well above the edge of your paper, so the difference in the two ellipses isn't all that big.

Step 4: Now draw in the top ellipse. Again, don't try to do it perfect the first time around, but give it a few goes. Also, hitting all the points isn't a holy task, getting an ellipse that looks like an ellipse is more important here :) Basically, what you have now is a cilinder. However, some more work is needed to make it read like one for everyone.

Step 5: Again you'll see that using some variance in line wheight is quite useful. I made the bottom line where the cilinder stands on the ground a bit thicker as the connection with the ground often isn't a neat fit. Also, note that I didn't stop the line at the horizontal axis but continued a bit 'around the corner'. This is to prevent yourself from giving the ellips a pointy end. I also made the vertical outlines a bit thicker. This isn't always necessary but in this case helps to set it apart from the surroundings. The top ellips doesn't recieve any extra attention, see the next step.

Step 6: Now add some shade. To do so with a marker, we face a problem. Markers don't really allow you to make a nice gradient unless you have the whole range of grays from 0 to 10. Even if you posses these, we're not going to use that yet. The reason is once again speed. Opening and closing all of your ten markers to get a gradient on something cheap and simple as this cilinder just isn't worth it. Therefore, we only use one gray (mostly I use the C3 of Copic for this, just don't use anything too dark yet). As you can see, I filled in a shade on one side of the cilinder and added a small stroke next to it to suggest a gradient there. This is a shortcut for markers, when doing this with pencils or on the computer feel free to make a nice gradient. We're almost done now, there's only a couple more things to point out here.

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In the figure above I added a couple of things. The most important aspect is the 'core shadow' (I'm aware this sounds like nuclear stuff, but that's the best translation I can come up with :P). Once the first layer of marker was almost dry -almost but not completely so the second layer gets to blend a bit with the first- I added another stripe of shade just a small distance from the outline of the cilinder. Two layers of the same marker gives a darker result. The reason for this is bounce light from the surrounding, which often makes the outline a bit ligther again. This doesn't necessarily always happen, but works well to sell this as a cilinder. I also made the cilinder hollow by adding a shade on the inside and by playing around with the linewheight again. Notice that this is a great way to correct earlier mistakes in the cilinder. You might notice the weird shape of the shade on the inside, this will be explained when we get to shadow construction later on.

The image to the right is a summary of some important terminology and info about cilinders. I suggest you try out a couple of them to get a feeling for it.

The image to the right is a summary of some important terminology and info about cilinders. I suggest you try out a couple of them to get a feeling for it.

Something you might have been missing with the cubes as well is the use of the horizon and vanishing points. I mentioned them as something you have to keep in mind while drawing the objects but not draw them. The reason for this is basically speed and complexity. While you could draw the horizon and vanishing points and neatly connect all the lines with them, this won't really help you in the end as it takes too long and when drawing a complex object it will become messy rather fast. Another reason is scale. Although you might not be aware of this consciously, most of the time you look at the world at eye height. In your drawings, this means the horizon is often around 1.7 meters from the ground. If we would draw a cilinder in this perspective with horizon and all (see below) we would easily end up with something rather bigger than you want.

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Check the figure standing next to it. Now imagine a little can standing at his feet. Now imagine drawing just that can with horizon and vanishing points on a single sheet of paper. You would end up with a lot of horizon and empty space and a rather small can somewhere at the bottom of the page. Of course, when zooming in on an object the horizon isn't at 1.70 meters from the ground and the vanishing points shift etc. etc., but it helps to draw things in the old perspective to convey the cilinder isn't as big as a castle tower.

In the assignment of next week you'll see that as soon as you've drawn the ellips, you can actually extrapolate the vanishing points and direction of perspective from it without having to draw them.

For now, the real assignment for this week is a small one, but combined with the ellips exercises above I think you've enought to do for now. The assignment is to draw me three rolls of toilet paper (see below :D). Draw two of them as standing on the flat side, the other one has to be lying on its side. You might want to do this from life, so you could make a sort of still life if you like. Make the cilinders and not the wobbly shape some of the real life toilet paper rolls have though. You don't have to add all the details either, it's about the cilinders here.

I didn't explain yet how to draw a cilinder lying on its side, but if you paid attention you might already know how to do so. Next week I'll explain more about it, but I want to see how you all tackle it. Also, there's another snag which I didn't tell yet, again I'll explain later on. The pizza below might give it away actually if you look at it more closely :)

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Deadline: Monday February 11

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Azalin
January 30th, 2008, 05:13 AM
hello there, just wanted to say im not your mentee but still i follow your Assignment. so thanx for your effort. It has helped me a lot get good confident lines in my drawing.

Lez
January 30th, 2008, 09:31 AM
Heck, wasn't able to upload anything till today so missed the cube assignement. Anyway, thought I could assemble something right away during this one.

Here's some

yoitisi
January 30th, 2008, 03:36 PM
Arkos78: Good to hear that :) if you feel like showing some of these you might want to check out the Lurkers' space.

Lez: Yeah I've heard more people complaining about that. If you want me to check your stuff anyway, post it in the Lurkers area and I'll see if I can get some comments in there.

asmodie
January 31st, 2008, 03:38 AM
Not to stress you... :) But I'm longing for the next assignment.

yoitisi
January 31st, 2008, 03:49 AM
Asmodie: On its way, my deadlines here are almost over :) I already put up something extra in the assignment thread yesterday but I think I need to edit it a bit before I put it up here.

yoitisi
January 31st, 2008, 05:24 PM
Added some to the assignment. I'm still not finished with the rest as I have to think on it some more, but I'll let you know. The deadline will probably be somewhere after next weekend (around February 11 or something) as we're having a sort of robot arena that weekend on the university and I'm going to compete in it with a couple of friends :P

arttorney
February 1st, 2008, 12:18 PM
Here is a shot at the ellipses.
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enrigo
February 1st, 2008, 07:07 PM
Arttorney: I think your last few ellipses looks too rectangular, the far left and right point should be smaller I guess.

Loomis' book got a nice explanation on construction of a circle, which is just a step further from what Yoitisi posted above. It might help for determining the curve of the ellipses.:drinkup:
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yoitisi
February 2nd, 2008, 04:27 AM
Arttorney: Enrigo is right, the last couple of ellipses miss the quarter point of the diagonal. When drawing the ellipses, it is often easier to just start drawing the ellips you want in the air a few times above to spot where you want it to get your bearings and only then put your pen to the paper. In this method, getting the ellips to look like an ellips is a bit more important than getting it to touch all the points you set out exactly. The latter is something you'll have to practice (and while drawing the ellipses you can actually correct yourself as said in the assignment). Also, watch the line wheight, your ellipses are rather definit already. A thin line gives you more freedom to correct while drawing them. Again, practice is important.

Enrigo: Hmm I'm probably opening a huge discussion here, but the way Loomis constructs his ellipses is fine up to a certain point (and to be honest, I think the method I've been teached is actually better and faster :x). The first thing is, he relies on the construction of a perfect cube (or square) to draw his ellips in. In the first exercise we've seen this isn't as fool proof and easy as he explains it there, and makes that the guides he uses aren't all that sure to start with. Secondly, in the method I'm going to try to explain you'll see that the whole cube or block around the cilinder is not needed to construct it. In fact, it is abundant and gets in the way later on. Loomis misses an important line (the horizontal axis that devides the ellips in two equal halves) that is quite usefull. It tells us where the ellips is widest, and more important which 'angle' is has. This will become more clear when we start drawing cilinder that are on their side rather than standing up straight. I think the difference lays in the fact that I'm relying on the ability to draw the ellipses in a freehand continues motion, while Loomis relies on the real 'construction' of the ellips by carefully drawing the shape.

Writing this all out and explaining this over the internet is way harder than just drawing examples and telling it while drawing :( I must not get ahead of myself by explaining all at once as it is difficult enough already for me to explain things in good order, but let me just ask you to keep that Loomis method for yourself for now, and after I'm done explaining how I go around it I think is a better time to compare the methods (don't remove them though, it's a good reminder that there is more than one way to Rome :)).

enrigo
February 2nd, 2008, 09:33 AM
Well I thought his last division line on the upper right picture would help with the curve problem. I'm sorry if it messes things up :dead:

yoitisi
February 2nd, 2008, 09:44 AM
Enrigo: hehe nah didn't mess things up, only that last page has a couple of things in it that Loomis doesn't really explain there, but which we will go into later on. The extra diagonals do help indeed to find the points on for the curve :)

asmodie
February 4th, 2008, 08:23 AM
Waiting for the full assignment... :)
Drawing circles, ellipses and more cubes...

yoitisi
February 4th, 2008, 12:23 PM
Patience patience :P I plan on putting it up in a couple of hours, if I'm sober enough.

yoitisi
February 5th, 2008, 07:47 AM
Alright the final assignment for this week is finally up. I had to plan a few things for the coming assignments before deciding in what order I'm going to tell my stuff, so it took me a while to get everything right. My apologies if I kept you waiting :)

arttorney
February 5th, 2008, 10:59 AM
I haven't seen it yet. Hope my effort of last night is not too divergent.
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OK. Here are the other pieces.
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UnSharpened
February 7th, 2008, 08:41 PM
Here are assignment5 which I've just done.

http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc33/matining/IDWAssignment5-b.jpg
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc33/matining/IDWAssignment5-c.jpg
I did this one while I was thinking: "Isn't that just rotating the paper and following the same approach?" Yet I still couldn't figure out the correct way to draw it, if there is a one.:^^;:
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc33/matining/IDWAssignment5-a.jpg

arttorney
February 8th, 2008, 11:44 AM
I just drew from life, but that laying down roll I drew does have a look I'm not thrilled about at the lower left.

Unsharpened- most of your grid of ellipses looks good. One of those really narrow ones looks like you made my first mistake, but I think you corrected it when you made the second row. I guess you just have to do multiple ellipses until you become an ellipse master.

enrigo
February 8th, 2008, 08:29 PM
I'm getting a terrible result out of these exercises, I'll grind on them some more tonight before doing the toilet paper roll.:ilaekae:

UnSharpened
February 9th, 2008, 08:56 AM
Thanks for reminding arttorney:D.
There are two things I found out important for me in ID drawing during these practice: drawing thin line and continuity of lines. I haven't realized the use of thin lines until this assignment. So, with several thin lines outlines the ellipse gradually, and draw the definite outline in one go. Applying the technique of drawing thin lines in sketches are also quite useful.

yoitisi
February 9th, 2008, 04:30 PM
I'm having a very busy weekend, so I'll try to give critiques and comments later on. The next assignment might take me a couple of days as well. I should start planning some spare time to get some rest :P Some quick observations though:

Arttorney: After seeing yours I realised I should have added to the description of the exercise: 'construct from life' instead of 'draw from life'. It is important to use the center line and both of the axis, because they help you keeping the right perspective and angles for the ellipses.

Unsharpened: Exactly :) That is why we took our time getting straight lines on paper. It is a very important aspect, as it allows you to correct your drawings while drawing without the need to erase anything or starting over.

arttorney
February 9th, 2008, 05:15 PM
Alright. That's what I did, but then erased the axes. You can still see the vertical axis slightly in the left standing up roll.

I'll redo them if you think I should. It was hard going for me about line weight because I could draw lightly if I didn't worry about hitting the ellipse correctly. I could worry about hitting the ellipse correctly if I didn't worry about line weight. These are great exercises to teach me to walk and chew gum at the same time.

yoitisi
February 9th, 2008, 05:30 PM
Arttorney: If you feel like redoing them go ahead. Since I'm not giving grades or anything, that's up to you :P I would suggest to keep all the construction lines in though, as later on with complex products you'll see they can give a lot of information to the viewer without being in the way or ruining the drawing. Also, focusing on thinner lines will allow you to make more ellipses to get it right, while the other way around you'll only have one shot.

enrigo
February 9th, 2008, 06:12 PM
:ore: I try to get all the paper rolls to be at different angle, that proofs to be a bit too ambitious for me.

D-Holme
February 10th, 2008, 10:19 AM
Worked through the activities and managed these - I feel my line skills are letting me down still so some of the pieces are a bit wonky.

I was working on eclipses from Seedlings Perspective 101 just before this topic went up so I include one of my practices as the last image.

Not sure whether I could say what the issue with the pizza image is but my head's cooked this week so I'm not feeling the most intuative.

arttorney
February 11th, 2008, 02:09 PM
About the pizza, is it that the central axis is tilted slightly to the left and toward us?

D-Holme
February 11th, 2008, 02:56 PM
mmm - went back to looking at the pizza too, as a photo perspective will be warping the proportions slightly but even then the back looks more 'pointed' than the front. Then I guess it is a pizza so isn't the most perfect of object - also artistically I cannot think of a reason why that would be.

hamtaro69
February 11th, 2008, 03:04 PM
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Oh my ,here i am !
This assignement was quite troublesome for me ,my light grey marker gone empty ,so im really sorry ,the shading looks awfull!
I used a a/2 paper so i tried to make close ups with the cam ,i draw freehand elipses on 2-3 a/2 sheets of paper these are on the first photos.

Then 2 sheet cylinder construction ,and the others are on a/3.

The toilet paper drawing is still missing,i try to hurry with that!

About my experience,i donno :) i think these exercises help me a lot ,in every case and i still make the "warming up" exercises from the last asignment!

Ah yes,it was really hard to try to construct a perfect cylinder ,in tthe second asignment

asmodie
February 11th, 2008, 04:07 PM
Here is my bad stuff as usual.

yoitisi
February 11th, 2008, 04:23 PM
Hmm I've got some commenting to do tomorrow :) If all goes well I've got the whole afternoon to do so and make the next assignment, so keep your fingers crossed.

About the pizza, the picture I found might not be the best example out there, but there's something about the idea behind cutting a pizza and seeing it in perspective...I'll explain it all soon I promise :D

At the moment, I'm still missing a couple of people I think: Legato, Pomegranate, Ixupi, Jorge Gecov and form2function. Again, Lez and form2function send me a PM with their reasons so I'll leave that for now. For the others, if you missed already 2 weeks in a row I think you are hereby doomed to the Lurkers thread if you can't give me a proper reason. I'm not going to be that strict with enforcing this as it's all voluntary and all, but so is what I'm doing here. Still some 14/16 hours to go though before I temporarily close this thread to get some comments in.

Legato
February 11th, 2008, 06:08 PM
heres my assignments -

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Assignments/Ellipses001Reduced.jpg

Just Kidding!!! (http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Assignments/Template.JPG)

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Assignments/Ellipses002Reduced.jpg

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Assignments/Ellipses003Reduced.jpg

http://incolor.inetnebr.com/legato/Assignments/Ellipses004Reduced.jpg

Jorge Gecov
February 11th, 2008, 08:51 PM
Hi!
Sorry for the delay, here follows my stuff. I'm really disappointed with the result and i'm thinking to try again.

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o68/Jorge_Gecov/ID%20class/elipses.jpg

yoitisi
February 12th, 2008, 05:29 PM
As I'm still working on the next assignment, I'll leave this open for a bit. If you want to post more of the exercise or haven't done so yet, hurry :)

After we have covered the basics (read: cubes and ellipses) things become a bit easier for me to set up I think. Two more assignments with ellipses are coming up, and some shadowconstruction after that.

yoitisi
February 17th, 2008, 10:47 AM
Time to get some critiques up in here :)

Arttorney: I already made a few comments on your work here and there, so I'll keep it brief. Apart from keeping in all of the construction lines and watching your line wheight, try not too hard to get the ellips to fit all the points you set out the first time around. If you focus too much on those points, the ellipse will become more like a diamond shape. It is more important to get a nice ellipse than to get it to fit in the points. If you missed the marks the first time, try to correct it on the go while continueing the movement for the second round and so on into the third. You might end up having three or four ellipses that miss one or more points, but the combination of them should convey an ellipse that fits.

UnSharpened: Looking good :) Not much to add here, only keep an eye on the bleed of your markers. I think you're using paper that allows the ink to bleed quite a lot, which makes the shade go over the edges and messes a bit with the shape of the cilinder. When adding the core shadow, make sure the first layer of marker is really dry, because right now the core shadow has bled all the way up to the outline of the cilinder. The cilinder on its side is explained in assignment 6 :)

Enrigo: Funny thing, you've got a correct cilinder on its side and one that is way off (the right one) in the same image. Check the next assignment for those :) Several small issues: since you're working with pencil, I suggest you try to get a bit more of a gradient out of it for the shading. I explained that it's hard to do so with markers, but with pencil this should be easy. Also, try to play around a bit with line wheight. Right now you made all the important lines heavier, but you might want to compare it with the cubes and which lines you make heavier there.

D-Holme: For those lines, try to keep making them in one fluent motion instead of building them up with little strokes. Especially the top right image suffers from this, as the ellipses all look a bit rough. It also really helps to get the shape right for the ellipses, as in my experience to draw them in one motion works better than to build them up from different strokes. For the rest they look okay, and the toilet paper rolls look better in terms of those lines already. For the cilinders, keep in mind that the lower ellipse is more round than the top one. In some of them you do that, in some you don't. Take care with the one lying on its side, as you've drawn it as if it's on eye height (we only see the side and front because the central axis is horizontal). As for the example Seedling posted, they are usefull but there are easier ways to draw ellipses instead of first constructing the square around it first :)

Hamtaro69: Good to hear you're still doing the inital exercises as well, it helps to get more control over your motions even for ellipses :) You seem to have taken this lesson quite well, I've got little to add. You've probably found that drawing more round ellipses is harder than the flatter ones, as more of the first went wrong if I look at your drawings. Take care with using green for drawing lines though, as in some cases the whole theory about line wheight doesn't really work if you start using color. For some colors the lines will only become more colorfull instead of 'heavier'. Might be just the picture though, I'm not sure :P

Asmodie: Don't get too depressed :P The top left cilinder looks most like a real cilinder, even thought the central axis is slightly at an angle. With most of your ellipses though, I think you focus a bit too much on the points you set out as guidelines. As I said to Arttorney, this causes your ellipses to become more like a diamond shape as you naturally try to connect the dots instead of focussing on the ellipse shape. Getting the ellipse to look like a proper ellipse is more important here than to really hit all the points.

Legato: Yep those templates are usefull sometimes :P I have one for circles and some for random curves, but they are rather vulnerable. Anyway, for now we're not going to use them. For the ellipse practice, you might find it useful to try them in between vertical lines as well, as you already have a start for a cilinder that way. Also, always add the major and minor axis to guide the ellipses. Especially the more round ellipses would benefit from it. Next time try to stick a little bit more to the exercise I set up please. They have a certain set-up that lets you experience things you wouldn't immediately see when just palying around. Making fun of the theory is cool and all but some more seriousness wouldn't hurt either I think. For example, those cilinders on the last sheet all are above and below the horizon making them look rather huge, but if these weren't rolls of toilet paper but something less recognizable we would read them as being huge. The cones and tube you added are something we'll dive into later on. Ah, and drawing on the wrong side of the paper does sometimes happen indeed :P

Jorge Gecov: I think the biggest issue for you is getting some more control over your arm movements. You might want to try some of the earlier exercises as well as the current assignments to train yourself. Apart from that, I think you've grasped the theory (the cilinder on the side looks good apart from a few things with perspective and point of view, check assignment 6 :)). Even when working with pencil though, the idea of the core shadow still applies. So if you shade your cilinders, keep in mind that bounce light from the environment makes the outline of the cilinder on the darker side a bit lighter again. Also, the lower ellipse should be more round than the upper one, as the last one is closer to the horizon and therefore appears to be flatter.