jenny

[Carnifex]

http://myimgs.com/data/carnifex/145825.php
this is jen,she's some silly highschool girl around 17 and she's gonna experience strange(not really) things which will (most probably) involve lots of sex(yes,you read right;it's just for the fun).her opponent is mary (of whom i have other pictures not yet uploaded), also a silly highschool girl,blablabla...the same as jen.i'm maybe going to do this as a story if i have the eagerness.those are just doodles of what the main character will look like.
what do you think of her?


those are very quick, and jen won't be that fat and mary will look different;those other strange things floating around are just distractions

[kory abram]

i think you need a cold shower.
heh, only kidding. keep working at her. i guess you could try giving her some kind of unique gesture or some kind of mannerism.

[Killer Napkins]

i have a unique gesture .. or thing.. or whatever.... u should make her nippin' all the time.. nonstop!! thatd be awesome.. ;)

[Carnifex]

heh,that's an interesting idea,maybe i'll pick it up:D
although nipping...;)we'll see.
on the character herself:some of you may know that "brittany"(or was it britney?) character from "daria".if you don't know who i'm talking about take reese witherspoon in "legally blonde".that's approximately her character(although i think i'll make her a bit more intelligent).she's got absolutely no idea what's going on when she's already in trouble,but she's always got a nice grin on her lips.mary is a bit more intelligent,thus knows better when it's time to shut up.although not even she will be rescued from the traps that jenny on her turn sometimes lies into her way.whatever.
i have a little problem on the character configuration:i don't know exactly how to draw her nose from the side(with the same cutie-look).somebody be able to help me on this one?

otherwise,are there any special things i should work on regarding the sketches and/or the characters?

[Carnifex]

ah yes,if anybody ask him/herself "how the hell does one get such ideas?",i got inspired mainly by this page (http://www.orgymania.net/warning.html)

[endregan]

your mind is perverted.

what good is it to be corrupt?

[van]

Well, if she is 17 then she is a kid and probably shouldn't be depicted in that fashion, anyway. You should have kept this one in your sketchbook.

[Carnifex]

i said around seventeen,which means she can actually also be near 19 or something.i just picked that age because she is intended to still be at some school or if you want,college.in any case she is not corrupted but only happens to slide into such situations.don't go dying on me.