Random doodle

[tanis]

It's been a long time since my last post to this board.. yesterday I was waiting and I grabbed my Wacom pen and doodled in PhotoShop.. here's the result after 20 mins..
Please don't kick my arse for being so lame at drawing :)

http://tanis.hateseed.com/albums/gfx2003/sketch_tipo2.jpg

[Ale]

Nice sketch! I like the contrasts and how you did his legs :D

[mtomczek]

I am going to disagree with ale here. There is alot that is fundamentally wrong with the piece. First off is the line, its chicken scratchy, showing lack of confidence in the line you are placing on the page. Second is anatomy, the arms, hands, torso etc. need alot of work, I recommend picking up a anatomy book and working through it, learning about each part. You need to think of the character in form, not outline. If you begin to do that you will construct the figure properly, realizing that there is mass there, not a paper cutout. Keep practicing, and study up.