Comics?

[Echarin]

Hope you don't mind a crappy drawn comic in the midst of this sea of beautiful art:

[Pablo Fransisco's 'Movie preview' voice]
You know all about the hero, but what about the villains?
http://cowblaster.250free.com/Ghostpac_01.jpg[/Pablo Fransisco's 'Movie preview' voice]

ps. I've had complaints about my pics not showing. If you can't see it, please tell me. If you can't see it try to drag it to the address bar.

[JoshuaTheJames]

awesome...

[Fozzybar]

nice, but you should change the font...it's hard to read...

Also the story could be finished after the first three frames, even the first one is sufficient...

But really nice comic...i like the idea...

[Echarin]

Originally posted by Fozzybar
nice, but you should change the font...it's hard to read...

Also the story could be finished after the first three frames, even the first one is sufficient...

??? I really can't see how that would be possible. I have to show the two ghosts talking, then the red putting on the costume and then leaving.
I could probably have skipped the fourth frame, and fused the last 3 together somehow. Maybe if I really wanted to save space I could have put it in 3 frames. I really can't see how I could possibly fit all of this into 1 frame? And I really can't see why I should. It's not as if the picture takes up too much space (as in space on the hard drive).

[enigma]

lol, funny man =D

in the first frame though, the continuity is off, the way u positioned the word bubble made me read everything the blue ghost said before the red ghost and i got a tiny bit confused

and is that reallly how its supposed to end? or is it just a rough, if if is maybe u should put it in the wip section

[Echarin]

Originally posted by enigma
and is that reallly how its supposed to end?

Yep, it's done. Any reason why it shouldn't end like that? Got any comments on the ending.
I'd love to hear them if you do.

Edit: PS. Anyone know of a forum that deals mostly with comics? I feel this doesn't really belong here amidst all the beautiful art and would rather like to post it on a forum dedicated to these kind of things.

Edit 2: Part 2 is done:

http://cowblaster.250free.com/Ghostpac_02.jpg

[PencilPunx]

I like the concept of this a lot, though I think the ending is a little confusing. Is that a super pac-ball he's about to eat? Meaning the ghost will be vulnerable under the costume afterall? I'm pretty sure that's what's happening, but I'm not positive. Good work though, I enjoyed it. And try www.penciljack.com for a site similar to this one that caters to comics.

[Echarin]

Originally posted by PencilPunx
I like the concept of this a lot, though I think the ending is a little confusing. Is that a super pac-ball he's about to eat? Meaning the ghost will be vulnerable under the costume afterall?

That's exactly what's happening.
Thanks for the link.

[catterpillar]

man if I hadn't read the first comic the second one would be impossible to understand!

[Fozzybar]

Oh, it's a super pac-ball :rolleyes:

I didn't get that first...you should make this clearer...

[Echarin]

Originally posted by Fozzybar
Oh, it's a super pac-ball :rolleyes:

I didn't get that first...you should make this clearer...

Any idea how I might do that?