Future Suit

[donschi]

i startet drawing a new character-design. This here is the start of the linart.

hope you like it so far. its my second pic i am posting in here.

donschi:D

http://www.gfx-scene.de/attachment/20030915192540.jpg

[donschi]

and this here is another WIP of me.
I know i have to work on the face, and i will do!!!!

hope you like it so far.

http://www.gfx-scene.de/attachment.php?img=20030902191538

donschi

[donschi]

hm, dont you like my pics, i would be happy for some comments:(

anyway here is an update of the first character. linart is mostly finished

hope now you like it
http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112e.jpg

[Famboozled]

wow i really like your style, and the stances look pretty cool. The only thing that bothers me is how small the eyes are in your linked WIp are a bit small. But yea i really like it1 :D

[maxetormer]

I like it too, I would like if you could post the image a bit smaller so that the proportions can bee seen as a whole
I think that the hands might me a bit off on the size, but i am not sure because i need to see the whole caracter on one view to compare the proportions of the hads correctly=)

other than that it is looking pretty good
are ya going to color it?

[donschi]

yes i am going to color it

her is the smaller version
http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112fx.jpg

[enigma]

u're line art is pretty good =) very clean

u've got an interesting style, i don't see any major problems with it, but the hands on the hips seem a tad to too small, but otherwise, thumbs up

[CsakiP]

The anathomy of the guy is a bit off. The arms are thin and the shoulders should be bigger. I think the legs are a bit short too compared to the upper body.
But the design is pretty cool and looks great so far.
Good job.

[donschi]

ok after a long time i am beginning with shading now.

hope you like it so far.

donschi
http://www.gfx-scene.de/attachment.php?img=20031011161117

[cartoonfox]

i love the line art. very crisp and clean. and the shading is looking great allready.

cant wait to see the final piece.

good job, keep it up.

[donschi]

so last update for today.

i continued working on the shading.

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112i.jpg

hope you like it.

donschi

[zeroe]

good work on the overall figure, i agree with the crits of the others
about the coloring: i think the face looks too much like the rest of the armor, like you cant distinguish it from the rest. perhaps trying a different brush might help.i think the overall shading is good tho, good grasp of shadows and contrasts.
keep it up

[donschi]

i know i have to light up the face a little bit, but this details have to wait until i finished the whole body with the basic shading.

her a little update.

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112k.jpg

[donschi]

so little update

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112m.jpg

[poisonspider]

HEY MAN, NICE WORK, one crit, armor blends with the skin color, looks weird. anyways i want to ask you something so could you please message me on aim(poisonspider35) or msn(spencer@travel-net.com) or ICQ as a last resort because i am hardely ever on (224603113) see ya soon

and by the way your link doesnt work for me
do you have a webpage too?

[Duchess]

Hey Donschi, I love your picture, I don't know why but the hands look too small to me, and if you could give him a bigger wood, he he. Oh and his toes look like their should be a thong in the shoe thru the toes. But that pic is very cool, looks like a futuristic ninja

[Johannes]

Shading is really nice
I like the design on the staff also :D

[Erik]

I think it's a nice picture, but it is quite flat, and especially the hip/crotch area is anatomy-wise not very strong. His abdomen seems stretched too. If he has all this armour on he should probably be bigger if a human is to fit inside.

Just a few observations, nice picture otherwise.

E.

[Jamaludin]

nice concept, and execution. Looking good, maybe its a bit true wat he was saying about flatness but still I love the CGing, nice work !!!

[donschi]

so, after a long time an update. soon i will finish the shading.

hope you like it so far.

donschi

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112q.jpg

[donschi]

ok i am nearly ready with the shading. Next is shading of the sword and bringing in some texture.

hope you like it so far.

donschihttp://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112r.jpg

[grinn]

Nice work my friend, its outstanding. i wish I had this kind of control in my work. I dont really like the idea of the open toed shoes, or the pony tail though. Just me though, looks great.

[Psionic]

definately incredible work, cool futurisic ninja design as well...anymore updates yet??

[donschi]

so little update, shading is now complete, will start coloring next.

hope you like it.

donschi

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112s.jpg

[donschi]

began with coloring, still have problems to decide colors.

hope you like it

donschi

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112t.jpg

[donschi]

worked on hightlights.

hope you like it.

http://aco-clan.strikenet.at/manga112v.jpg

[zeroe]

great coloring!
i think some more color variation would add more flavour to it. and the face still need a little bit of work. colro choices seem solid tho.hmm maybe the little ponytail should go, its kinda annoying ;)