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catterpillar
September 15th, 2003, 01:29 AM
ok so it's not quite up to hawkprey's standard, but a faithful style-ape nonetheless. hawkprey, this one's for you. btw I only just got my tablet yesterday (17th birthday! yay!) so I'm still getting the hang of it. :)

http://www.geocities.com/tovewabe/waspstilts.txt
catterpillar
September 21st, 2003, 08:41 PM
sniffle- no comments! no comments at all!
McNallyism
September 21st, 2003, 08:47 PM
OK heres my critique, The red x in the white box is a nice attempt at creating chroma and shape contrast, but lets be honest, its been done to death...heh heh.

-Sean
ChadTHX1138
September 22nd, 2003, 08:51 PM
you mean like the lousy attempt at an avatar Mcnallllly?:D
JoshuaTheJames
September 22nd, 2003, 09:17 PM
Chad..... that is his avatar...
027
September 22nd, 2003, 11:03 PM
your lines are grey instead of white like they should be.

that kinda ruins the contrast of the hawkprey style

but nice concept
catterpillar
September 23rd, 2003, 06:17 AM
actually that's a good crit.. I must admit it lacks just about any contrast...
027
September 23rd, 2003, 03:42 PM
excuse me, but i just thought id go in PS and tweak it a little bit

just changing the brightness/contrast, i got this:

http://home.comcast.net/~027/catterpillar2.jpg

looks a lot more like a hawkprey now i think
mtw
September 23rd, 2003, 04:30 PM
That looks good. The two front legs should be darker at the bottom, I think.
catterpillar
September 23rd, 2003, 06:49 PM
woah! that's really cool! surely I can do *some* grey lines tho?