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PeterT
January 6th, 2008, 09:47 AM
Hello all of you,

my name is Peter Tissen and I am 20 years old. I have been doodling ever since I can remember and I have admired the great artists here and on cgtalk for a very long time.
Though I have been doodling for such a long time, I never got serious with it. Some years ago I tried to brush up my skills a bit with Betty Edwards "Drawing with the right side of the brain". But I stopped half way through and lost interest.
Now I want to show some serious improvement.
Having read often about how awesome Andrew Loomis' books are, I got to start with his 'Fun with a pencil'.

So my first post are some studies from that book

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I would greatly appreciate any kind of comment, tip or critique

Oh and last but not least: I am not a native english speaker and so errors in spelling and especially grammatic will occur. If you don't understand what I want to express with a sentence please ask and I will try to rephrase it.

Rockhart
January 6th, 2008, 10:23 AM
these are looking pretty good! can't really crit. what you have though so post more!

zaimless
January 6th, 2008, 11:39 AM
good form for a head base

Carbono
January 6th, 2008, 02:03 PM
Keep practicing man, its the best advice.
Draw, draw and draw more. You'll see improvement.

DoktorNo
January 6th, 2008, 02:23 PM
Good to see you here. I also like doodling, check my sketchbook. :)

As others said: draw, draw, and draw. I have simple resolution: make at least one sketch a day.

PeterT
January 8th, 2008, 02:46 PM
Thank you all for your comments.

I am currently ill and so my motivation to draw or rather do anything at all is kinda small. I don't wanna scan the stuff I did with a pencil so I'm gonna show you what I drew on my DS

I drew these 2 while being in the waiting room:
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The next one is a black-magician from Yu-gi-oh. The topic for the current Daily Sketch on Cgtalk is "Magician of Darkness" and this is the first thing that came to my mind.

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The colors look totally different on the DS and I couldn't really focus so that are my excuses for the outcome of the pictures.

PeterT
March 23rd, 2008, 05:28 PM
Man it's been really hard for me to get myself to draw. So almost all of these were made on the train where I got almost nothing else to do. But I am hoping to get more time once I start going to university (starting next month I'll study Computational Visualistics).

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the baby is from one of loomis books and the rest is just scribbling

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again some stuff from loomis books

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loomis and basic stuff from http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/ and the face and eye to the very right is my own stuff without ref

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some stuff from http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/ and a few own things including the face in the upper left

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mainly own tries to get face elements right

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everything without ref

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the eye was more of a scribble than a sketch and the heart was inspired by http://ariokh.deviantart.com/art/Applesauce-47589548

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without ref drawn on my DS as all the following pics are

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just a little more comic like approach to the eye

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again a comic-styled eye

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without ref a try to get the nose somehow shaded correctly



As always I'd appreciate any kind of comments and critiques

PeterT
March 23rd, 2008, 05:41 PM
forgot to post the last ds pic:

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another eye this time focusing on the iris