Clocktower's Sketches Thread (UPDATED!)

[ClocktowerArtworks]

Hope to add a few each day or week. I'm always looking for helpful criticism so judge as harshly as you like. Please let me know what works and what doesn't.

Just one for today...

did this for school today.

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/OzWolf00/fatpants.bmp

oh yeah...it's part of a book cover. book is called, "Do These Make My Arse Look Fat? A Cheeky Look at Women's Fashion." I have a crazy instructor from the UK.

[dyoung]

hey bro, nice work love the line weight... If I had one thing to say I would say that the back looks a little flat to me. It almost seems like i'm looking straight at it rather than at a 2/3rds view. Other than that sweet work

cheers!
dyoung
www.dmfy.com

[ClocktowerArtworks]

thanks...i can see what you're talking about...i'll keep that in mind. Also it looks like I didn't balance her weight properly.

[ClocktowerArtworks]

some stuff from a few weeks ago...

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/OzWolf00/necromancer.jpg

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/OzWolf00/climber01.jpg

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/OzWolf00/sniper.jpg

http://mywebpage.netscape.com/OzWolf00/Frank01.jpg

lemme know what works and what doesn't...thanks

[Aidan]

Wow, you recent stuff is great!
Very cool lines and detail, though the 2nd girl's a bit stiff.
But the cloth-detail on the pick-guy and the muscles on the last dude own my world.

[alti]

very solid style, my fave is the character at the bottom,
and i feel the fact that it has no face strengthens the theme. All muscle with no personality in it, yeah i like it.

[ClocktowerArtworks]

Thanks for responding.

Aidan- Yeah, I've really been working on getting a good sense of motion and movement out of my figure drawings lately, but i don't know how successful i've been...i'll post some of them soon. When i look back through sketchbooks all i see are a bunch of really static looking figures...something to work on.