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unluckydevine
December 29th, 2007, 09:55 PM
Hi, my name is nikki devine.. i currently reside in las vegas.. this is my first sketch dump,these are graphite and ink on paper.. i would like to hear some critics if u don't mind looking.. thanx yall.. :teeth:
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Carbono
December 30th, 2007, 07:02 AM
Nice tattoo-like style, you really got a strong hand for ink.
Keep it up its looking nice!

Blue Star
December 30th, 2007, 07:09 AM
Very nice work. I really like the first one. The design and the detail is amazing. I also like the elephant character as well. it's very nicely done. That last picture is pretty nice too. It has a nice simple flow to it and I like the layout of the design and how everything connects.

unluckydevine
December 30th, 2007, 10:54 AM
thank u carbono!
and thank u blue star!

unluckydevine
December 30th, 2007, 11:36 AM
so.. ppl commented on the stuff that i put up last night, so i have decided to put more up in preparation for the workshop next week! im soooooooo excited! holy crap! but yeah.. more artz..
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comments and critics would be awesome!thankx again!

BohemianChaos
January 31st, 2008, 10:02 PM
Wow, I don't recognize some of this stuff... I love what you do with pen! The few faces in the last post (self portraits?) are awesome. I need to practice my penmanship more. :P I guess my comments thus far are to keep practicing anatomy. The body of the woman in the very first image is doing some wonky stuff, as are the muscles of the superhero in the second post... I know the muscles are exaggerated but the right leg muscles are doing something funky.

I can't wait to see more! It was so good to meet you in Seattle! :D

Janae

ps... 2 words... vagina dentata. lmao. :tihi:

Niva.
January 31st, 2008, 11:23 PM
Ok you're excellent with the inks, I especially like this one: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=268802&d=1199035607

I do think it is a bit unclear though, some shading/lighting would help that scene pop.