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lfield
December 26th, 2007, 12:25 PM
Thanks for crits and comments reworked. Still haven't a better title.
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee279/lfield_photos/BirdSoldiercopy.jpg

guggemmaneuver
January 3rd, 2008, 04:19 PM
HA! LEE!

Awesome job!

Critique: Get reference on the gun... there are hundreds of thousands of gun photos... combine one or two, maybe look at other machines. right now this is a big flaw of the comp. maybe a pistol? would it be more natural for him to be holding onto the head of the bird a little... doesn't look like this saddle would really hold him on. the background could havec a little more depth too / on the ground but that's a secondary issue. most pressing i'd say would be the gun.

Praise: This is the first piece of yours i've seen... very cool to see digital painting work coming from you. although i was wanting to come to the collaborative show that yourself the th-E were in, just wasn't really possible :( . Show us more art! Tell th E and MOTYKA / melissa hello. we'll meet one of these days i'm sure :) cheers and ...
LETS SEE MORE ART!

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