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al-x
September 11th, 2003, 08:28 AM
Some recent marker sketches

this is one actually my first atempt with markers. It's about 1 and half hours work I think.
http://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/characters/punk_girl.jpg

This one I did for school. Worked further on a five minut sketch from lifedrawing class. Less than an hour.
http://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/sketches/ice_queen.jpg

Didn't like this one so I gave up on it... But I liked the design though
http://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/sketches/sheep.jpg

about 3 hours. But the concept is too much like the Bat-jet.
http://alextornberg.com/art/concepts/veichle/fighter.jpg

Critics are very welcomed

WildSpruceMoose
September 11th, 2003, 04:01 PM
Good work. I see some anatomical issues with the head in the first one and some leg/arm proportions though. The jet is very well shaded and finished.

al-x
September 12th, 2003, 02:48 PM
Yeah,
I'm not really pleased with her head. The left ear looks strange. And the head is a bit to flat.

van
September 12th, 2003, 03:24 PM
Good work! I see some anatomy issues. The first one has been mentioned but in the second pic you can tell that the anatomy problems make it look really stiff.

Spacepope
September 14th, 2003, 03:59 AM
I don't mean to be a bastard now, but...
The human skeleton is kept together by muscles, skin and tendons, without these the bones cant really connect...

My point is, its actually nearly impossible to hold a whole skeleton without all the bones being glued or stapled together. ;)

I dont mean to criticize your work, I think its really nicely drawn.


Well, that was my cup of tea. ;)

al-x
September 15th, 2003, 04:17 AM
Yeah I know, but my lifedrawing teacher came up with the funny idea of putting a plastic skeleton i her lap.

So it isn't meant to be realistic, just a way to learn how the bones connect and stuff like that....