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ODIN SIX
September 11th, 2003, 02:47 AM
These first two are Prisma Makers on multi-medium Vellum and some ink

http://odinsix.250Free.com/dragon.jpg



http://odinsix.250Free.com/Scorpio-color.jpg


This one is a pencil drawing colored in Photoshop....

http://odinsix.250Free.com/Skinny-J2a2.jpg

CsakiP
September 11th, 2003, 04:52 AM
I think you need an other host.
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ODIN SIX
September 11th, 2003, 12:30 PM
ok I got these back up...


Hope they stay up:chug:

Rockman
September 12th, 2003, 02:07 AM
Honest criticism?? The style makes it look very messy and flat....The dragon has badass linework, he just needs better shading to make him look 3-dimensional. I'd also fuck with the contrast in p-shop to, well, give it more contrast...my 2 cents...

later, B

SmilingDemon
September 12th, 2003, 10:41 AM
well i think that even if it's not really good yet(no offense),
you sure got something here so keep working man !
just work and learn ! :)
huuu and perhaps you should try to find a different way of inking ( more black and bigger lines ?)
:chug:

ClocktowerArtworks
September 12th, 2003, 11:06 AM
i agree, heavier line weights in the foreground will help distinguish foreground from background, for example on the half-scorpion piece, the head, body and front claws and legs should have a heavier line weight whearas the the tail and scorpion body should have thinner line weights. also, consider pulling the tip of the tail in to the extreme close foreground to help establish depth. Same goes with Puff the magically cool dragon. keep experimenting with mixed-media...you'll get some cool stuff. (says the guy who rarely picks up more than a pencil, eraser and set of micron pigma pens ;) )