View Full Version : New Comic Book "Immortal" Looking for Publisher
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:43 PM
In a world filled with death and destruction, the young Thomas Bowmen got called to do Gods work and entered the clergy as a priest.After witnessing the death of his family , He lost faith in his creator and became possessed by demonic possessions. Instead of fully turning evil , He used his powers to protect the city from monsters that haunt it. He signed a contract with these demons that made his soul Immortal (He can never die) and became Full property of these demons. My email is cfarias1983@yahoo.com and portfolio is http://s236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:44 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/immortalcover.jpg
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:45 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/002.jpg
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:45 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/3.jpg
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:46 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/Scan10004.jpg
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:47 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/Scan10005.jpg
cfarias1983
December 17th, 2007, 01:47 PM
http://i236.photobucket.com/albums/ff217/carlosfarias83/Scan10006.jpg
AntiMatty
December 20th, 2007, 01:46 AM
i'm going to be totally honest. this is a complete ripoff of spawn and the artwork is terrible. if you are still in middle school or starting highschool then this is pretty good, but guessing from your "name" you are about 24. i don't want to hurt your feelings , but someone should tell you. at the least take some drawing classes. draw what you SEE around you. go take some figure drawing courses. and for god's sake DO NOT use anime as your influence .
rorke
December 20th, 2007, 12:08 PM
I get the feeling that your better off working on your writting skills and just letting a professional work on your story. You might get a publisher if you were a team. and no I DO NOT want to work on it. I am just saying. Either go to art school and get better or be a writer and pay an artist. You get to be in the biz with half the work. Just think about it cause Anty is right. Sorry.
cfarias1983
December 20th, 2007, 01:57 PM
I respect your guys opnion and it went hrough one ear and ou t the other. As far as this being horrible. I saw Both your artworks and Im not really impressed by either of your artwork. So if it is a question of us all bettering our artwork. I think All three of us should go. Because you guys suck just as much as my artwork. TAke care and god bless
cfarias1983
December 20th, 2007, 02:06 PM
And who wants YOUUUUUUUU to work on it no offense I rather a blind man draw for me.
rorke
January 3rd, 2008, 09:20 PM
(private message from cfarias1983) I wouldnt even pay you 20 cents to do a page for me.Your not that great so get off that high mountain you think your on.And kill yourself do us all a favor
How is that respecting someone’s opinion by sending disgusting private messages like that?? You have some hard hits ahead of yourself if you don’t accept that you need to calm down and and hone your skill.
I hope employers see this example of what your temper is like. If you cant handle crit you definitely won’t be able to handle when an employer wants you to do edits or when he doesn't like something you have done for him.
Digital_Blacksmith
January 3rd, 2008, 09:32 PM
Well he sure as hell acts like he is in middle school. Seriously, take some drawing classes, learn to accept critiques, and lose the temper. This isnt the field for that.
OurSin
January 5th, 2008, 06:21 PM
I don't see how telling somebody their art is terrible is a critique
and judging by the work in his link, it wasn't that bad anyway......just needs work
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