Back in 92 (Uncolored)

[Redmond]

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[tyboogie]

cool man

i think the 4th panel (spideys head) would have been stronger had we seen him pullingthe mask on from behind (back of his head) --or a diff shot of the body--

and save the frontal head shot for the last panel to add drama


now lets see color--ty

[DustinTrimble]

This page looks good, but every shot shows the character the same size. This is boring. Also looking at panel size, there is no money shot here, the top and left panels are fighting some for precidence.

My suggestion on how this could be improved on: I think maybe a large panel showing a MJ head nibbling on Spideys ear would have sold this better. This would be the important panel. Then, the actual spidey being on the streets could be its own splash page.

Or you could have the last panel be the important shot, and toned down the getting ready shots.

As always your drawing rocks. Overall great job, man.

[Redmond]

For the all the same size thing...

I was mostly concentrating on leaving enough place for the word balloons, thinking it'd earn me more points with the judges.