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Luke Mrozek
September 9th, 2003, 07:25 PM
Well folks, I'm new here, and this is my first post. I hope You all will like it, if someone wants to know something more about me, please feel free to ask...

My site is not working at the moment, sorry.

It would be an honour if You would like to c & c my image.


http://www2.freepichosting.com/Images/78796/0.jpg

This one is much smaller than the original, but when my site will be up'n'runnin I will post link to it, i hope you will still be able to see some details.

Thx for viewing and comments.

Luke.
feels
September 9th, 2003, 07:29 PM
Quite Freudian.

Anyways, I would have liked to see the feet on both of the figures. I also don't think that the ankles on the monster should be that skinny... he seems more of a "cankles" kind of guy.
Luke Mrozek
September 9th, 2003, 07:36 PM
I can assure You, that monsters ankles are not skinny, thats just the way that shadows lay on them, that you can't see his ankles. If it would look like u said, both figures would look like if they were glued to the background...and that's not the look that I wanted to achieve. Thx for commenting.

Luke.
SaltyDog
September 9th, 2003, 10:44 PM
I'm guessing you painted over Poser models? If not then you might want to rework your facial anatomy so it doesn't resemble them so much.
the good war
September 10th, 2003, 12:42 AM
i really love the coloration of the girl's knees and just the coloration of the entire body i suppose but the stance of the blue guy and and lack of extreme color changes in the skin tone (compared side by side with the girl) and the quick procedural background make the image a little painful
i would also say break up the glossiness and specularity of the chain more and the glow on the sword sticks out alot i would either try to incorperate this glow throughout the peice or i would lose it
egerie
September 11th, 2003, 12:43 PM
Just for future reference ; use a nudity warning in the title of your post if there's a need for it.
Maybe your piece would benefit from a better background. I'm sure there wouldn't be any more confusion if we could see Blue-guys' feet and perhaps if they were placed somewhere.