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yeticatcher
September 9th, 2003, 05:28 PM
Here's a PS7 painting after noodling with a sketch.

http://www.trubalcava.com/concepts/Sleepy_colorFinal.jpg

darkcult
September 9th, 2003, 07:54 PM
I would crop a bit of the upper part of the picture ( pushing the girl up), that way the composition would work better( well for me anyway) but that is just my personal thinking, anyhoo…

Very nice piece and eye candy colours. You’ve captured the atmosphere nicely.

Beautiful work.

:chug:

the good war
September 10th, 2003, 12:53 AM
you've capture her "ASS" very well





but i think the highlight where her shadow ends should be more of a midtone:D

mos667
September 11th, 2003, 01:14 PM
I agree with Darkcult about the cropping of the picture, cutting of some of the bed in the top would make it seem more, together. The shadows take on an aspect all their own which I do not think compliments the subtle mood of the girl. Also It would seem more as if you were focusing on where she was looking rather than what was on her left.

Man, the bed looks just amazing. So soft! Great job on it. How did you do the amazing texture on it? (brushes technique?)

Also, her skin near her, uhm, thighs looks a little too textured for the skin, same on her arms. You may want to soften that up a bit.

Otherwise this is a great picture, very well done! :chug:

mos.

yeticatcher
September 11th, 2003, 04:50 PM
Thanks for all the comments. Cropping might be in order, I lke the idea. The roughness on her skin is left over from the sketch. I played with wet edges and opacity on the PS7 brushes to get the effect that I wanted.

Thanks again.