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SmilingDemon
September 9th, 2003, 03:01 PM
:D
http://www.smilingdemon.com/cyberfreak1.jpg
hello everyone, i am new here
so this is my fisrt post-pic

battlemonkey
September 9th, 2003, 03:13 PM
nice concept,
my crit would be that it has no depth, almost as if hte demons pressed up against a glass,?? everything has the same amount of shading, fix that and it'll look pretty freaky~
keep postin, you could learn a lotta stuff from these pros!
:chug:

CKWorth
September 9th, 2003, 03:15 PM
Wow, that is a lot to look at. It's a good concept and you've made that creature look quite frightening. I wouldn't want to be caught in a room with it. Only thing I would say is give it a focus. It's got the same amount of light all over it. Perhaps just have the top creature in light and the rest fading into shadow. Nice background too.

SmilingDemon
September 9th, 2003, 03:25 PM
yeah your right guys about the depth and the lights,
color it's a new thing for me and i'm currently working on it.
feel free to give me tips or rework the pic to show me,
i'm willing to learn from you all

Luke Mrozek
September 9th, 2003, 07:56 PM
Well...it's a bit flat, but other than that, it's good, this kind of style prefers that kind of strokes, so u did good job on it.

Luke.

pstraub
September 9th, 2003, 08:22 PM
lots of fun...cool

Howdy
September 9th, 2003, 09:41 PM
It would be more demonesque if you were to lose the bottom part. As the picture loaded it looked great. Then the 3 heads appeared and it broke the flow of the body. The upper part is good. I don't have any ideas for the bottom. ;) I just know it clashes with that excellent top.

(the 3 faces look like they are grinning, not evil)

SmilingDemon
September 10th, 2003, 01:41 AM
that's an excellent idea man !!
if i cut the picture in two i got two monsters instead of one !!!!
haaaarrrr maybe i will survive to my schedule :) :) :)

SmilingDemon
September 11th, 2003, 02:38 PM
is that better this way ?
huuuu...anyway more and new CyberDemons coming soon,

http://www.smilingdemon.com/cyberfreak1a.jpg

huuuu...anyway more and new CyberDemons coming soon,


http://www.smilingdemon.com/cyberfreak1b.jpg

got to show you the sketches too...

Vince.vda³
September 13th, 2003, 11:30 AM
It's a Phalanx... run awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!

Cool piece of art! :)

bbwolf
September 14th, 2003, 07:18 AM
nice to see. Reminds me of battle angel alita.

The chop off the pic in two and the darken is a good improvement. Still, it´s just a darkening around the edges. No real deepth cue. How a bout his shadow projecting at the wall in the back. Then again, it´s a cool piece. How about some more?

SinisteR
September 18th, 2003, 10:19 AM
That`s freaky good! Real scary. (may sound a bit sarcastic, but it really isn`t.)