Feedback please

[mrbo18]

Hi all, it's my first post here, but i thought i'd put up one of my current works in progress. I need to get up the shading and make a descent backround for it. Comments?

http://www.geocities.com/mr_bojangles_93/Indian4.jpg

um, if the link doesn't work just go here and click on the second thumb in on the works in progress section.

http://www.geocities.com/mr_bojangles_93/gallery.html

[Danilo]

He dont have ballance, and left arm is too fat.

If you want to show your images upload them to http://mywebpage.netscape.com/_fm/

[CsakiP]

I suggest that you stay away from PS's default lensflare or use it very-very softly.

[Duchess]

Hello, It's nice!, I think you should add some stitching of some kind on the tan sash hanging down, make it look leathery almost, and make the mountain higher up, ciao

[Pencil Soldier]

Your gonna get ripeed on aobut the lens flare...or just ignored.

Try adding shading and some texture.

[mrbo18]

Yeah, that whole lense flare thing looks pretty bad i know. That's not the final backround for the character, i just needed something quick to put him in front of. Also, to the above post, i'm a bit confused by your comment that he's off balance, i just don't see it. Could you elaborate on the problem? Thanks for the info tho.

[Danilo]

He is not off the balance enough to fall, but his right leg is under big pressure, I mean it is not natural standing.